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HopeIsWhatWeCraveThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. posted this thread...
Sept. 20, 2012 at 5:04 pm

 
Kalderyn is modern day Eden. Heaven on Earth. No one is sick. No one dies. There is no homelessness, or hurt. No pain or fear. No one works or struggles. Ruled by a group of kind and loving Elders called The Counsil, Kalderyn and all of those in it are at peace. Everything is perfect. Or is it???
 
The truth is, underneath the surface, everything is not perfect. For, in order to keep the city under their control, each year The Counsil selects a small group of girls and boys between the ages of 14 & 18 to be exiled from the city, and made to journey into the unknown world with little knowledge of what to expect, a small pack of provisions and supplies each, and only an incomplete map to guide them. None of them ever return...
 
The story starts on the day in which the exiles will be announced. Everyone is waiting anxiously in front of their TVs for the Chief Elder to announce the names of those selected, praying their name is not one of them. They are announced in age order, Rory Tillmos, Taran Eshler, Oliana Whynd, Liam Qoll, Eldrie Hevlar, Lydi Maross, Finn Thulman, and Keiran Mellez. None of those chosen know anything about their companions, as The Counsil intended. And now each of them are given a small pack, and shoved out into the unknown with no idea of what to do next, yet detirmined to somehow survive... 
 
Here is the list of characters: Lydi, age 16, female; head-strong, control freak, out-spoken. Keiran, age 15, female; shy, soft-spoken, intelligent. Oliana, age 17, female; talkative, flirty, blonde. Eldrie, age 16, female; sullen, moody, argumentative. Rory, age 18, male; natural leader, inventive, considerate. Liam, age 16, male; cunning, pursuasive, seductive. Finn, age 15, male; joker, spontaneous, friendly. Taran, age 17, male; reserved, quiet, perseptive.
 
Please choose a character that has not already been chosen, and create your skelie, following the example I am about to post. You must use the names, ages, and personalities mentioned already!!!

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HopeIsWhatWeCraveThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 20, 2012 at 5:20 pm

This is both my skelie and the example!
 
 
Name: Lydi Maross
 
Age: 16
 
Personality: Lydi is very head-strong, and tries to take charge frequently, which tends to annoy some people. She speaks her mind, and often sayings the things which others are afraid to.
 
Looks: Lydi is often considered a beauty. She has long, slightly wavy chocolate brown hair down to her bottom,  and side bangs which sometimes cover her left eye. Her lips are full and dark, and during her time in Kalderyn, always moist and conditioned. Her eyes are a deep chocolate brown much like her hair, and rimmed with thick black lashes. She is 5'6'', slender, and willowy.
 
Miscellaneous(optional): She has a beautiful singing and speaking voice, very soft and lilting.

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Sept. 20, 2012 at 5:32 pm

((I do noot care how many RPs I am in! Oliana is whom I call!))

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HopeIsWhatWeCraveThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 20, 2012 at 6:46 pm

OK, that's great! Just fill out the skeleton lie the example shows!

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DestroyedHeartThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 20, 2012 at 7:19 pm

Can I make one of them have red hair
 

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HopeIsWhatWeCraveThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 21, 2012 at 12:45 am

Sure thing! Whatever you want them to look like! Just make sure to follow the names, ages, and personalities. Thanks for taking interest!

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QueenAnne replied...
Sept. 21, 2012 at 10:11 am

((Lydi seems like my type of character. :D Can I post a skellie of her later tonight?))

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DestroyedHeartThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 21, 2012 at 1:10 pm

Name: Rory Tillmos
Age: 16 (right)
Gender: Male
Appearance: Sea green eyes, si 6 foot (Not sure if this was in their) messy red hair, tanish skin, always wheres favorite red sneakers.
Personality:  Rory is very inventive and a born leader, He is also very considerate. He doesn't like wandering around on his own though because survival comes in packs.
Bio: He was choosen, Mother and Father very caring one has brown hair the other has blonde
(How's this)
 

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ZetoniThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 21, 2012 at 1:34 pm

(Can I have Liam? And btw, is one post per day enough?)

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ZetoniThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 21, 2012 at 1:34 pm

(Can I have Liam? And btw, is one post per day enough?)

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sorla replied...
Sept. 21, 2012 at 1:40 pm

((Can I have Finn?))

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QueenAnne replied...
Sept. 21, 2012 at 1:44 pm

((Oh, shoot. Just noticed your example. I'm sorry, I didn't see it before. I'll take Keiran, then.))

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HopeIsWhatWeCraveThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 21, 2012 at 2:16 pm

( ( Haha! That's OK. I actually felt kinda bad having to tell you no. Sure, you can have Keiran! ) )

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HopeIsWhatWeCraveThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 21, 2012 at 2:17 pm

( ( Yeah, sure, you can have Liam! And yeah, one post a day will be fine. If you can make more than one, that would be great, but one a day is alright! ) )

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HopeIsWhatWeCraveThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 21, 2012 at 2:18 pm

( ( Sure you can have Finn! Just post a skelie ASAP! ) )

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HopeIsWhatWeCraveThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 21, 2012 at 2:19 pm

( ( That looks great DestroyedHeart! Nice job. ) )

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sorla replied...
Sept. 21, 2012 at 2:28 pm

Name: Finn Qoll
Age: 15
Appearance: Finn has sunny yellow hair that is all over the place and bright blue eyes that are full of energy and laughter. Finn has a lean build and is fairly tall, but typically slouching. He has a smile more often then not.
Personality: Finn is care free and happy go lucky. He is unpredictable and it seems that he takes nothing seriously. Most people are annoyed by his lack of worry and constant wise cracks, but Finn is genuinely a nice person. He is scatterbrained and has a short attention span, but this causes him to see patterns and make connections that others can not. 
Other: Finn is a talented artist, but he has few skills other then that. He is commonly described as a unruly puppy by the elders.

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ZetoniThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 21, 2012 at 2:49 pm

Name:  Liam Qoll
 
Age: 16
 
Personality: Εven though Liam has a hidden arrogant side, he is just a master of the social skills. He knows exactly how to make someone like him, how to convince others to follow his ways and also how to isolate the unplesant ones.  Being a cunning person he is,  he can easily find solutions to practical problems. However he doesn't  always share them with everyone...
 
Looks: Liam's appearance matches his charming personality. He has shiny neck-lengthed wavy pitch black hair  and mischievous grey eyes. He has an angular oval face, with handsome facial charachteristics and and a fair skin complexion. He is tall with a toned body that most girls in Kalderyn can't resist. 

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Sept. 21, 2012 at 2:59 pm

((Zetoni, can my charrie be going out with yours, please? I have Olaina.))

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ZetoniThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 21, 2012 at 3:05 pm

(Yeahp! And sorla, I think that Finn's surname is Thulman...)

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