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Aeliss-NovakThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. posted this thread...
Sept. 18, 2012 at 5:30 pm

I think this is the first 1x1 I've ever made. :D
 
Two teens-a boy and a girl- are kidnapped and taken somewhere to be held for ransom. They don't know where they are, or anything.
 
WARNING: This will be kind of dark, like a higher end PG-13
 
I'm taking the boy. :)

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Triumph replied...
Sept. 18, 2012 at 5:35 pm

((Pick me!))

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Aeliss-NovakThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 18, 2012 at 5:38 pm

((*picks Triumph* Yay! :D I'll have my skellie up in a bit.))

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Aeliss-NovakThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 18, 2012 at 6:01 pm

Name: Tory Payne
 
Age: 15
 
Appearance: 5'11", lean, and somewhat muscular. He's got thick, curly, dark black hair that's always a mess. Grayish, slanted eyes that usually have this intense, yet innocent look about them, yet can turn hard as diamonds when he's angry. High cheekbones and tanned skin.
He wears loose T-shirts, jeans, leather jackets and boots. In colder weather he loves scarves, but it's September and not v=cold enough yet.
 
His right eye is bruised and his lip split from fighting before the chloraform knocked him out.
 
Personality: He's intelligent, and usually pretty quiet. He'll go silent for hours, just thinking. Sometimes when he thinks he'll be perfectly still, other times he needs to pace around in circles.
He's generally a nice person, but he can be fierce and has a nasty temper. He gets into fights a lot, but never without reason.
 
Bio: Ever since he was little his family has kept moving around. The longest he ever stayed in one place was a couple years, before they'd pack up and leave for business, or whatever the reasons. He was taken three days ago, on his way to school.

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Triumph replied...
Sept. 18, 2012 at 6:08 pm

Name: Nikki (Nicolette) Dae
Age: 16
Appearance: Nikki has brown hair with luscious curls that comes up to her mid-back and are usually topped by a beanie of some sort. She has huge, innocent, grey eyes that peer into your soul and can see through most lies. She usually wears a half smile on her face, and blushes when she is embarrassed and or flattered. She is skinny and stands at around 5'2. She can usually be seen wearing a plaid shirt or a sleeveless shirt ontop of skinny jeans or shorts. She usually wears military boots or converse. She has multiple piercings in her ear and tiny gauges for a first hole. She is never seen without her backpack, which has many unexpected things inside of it. 
Personality: She can be very loud and she loves to be around people, but she has to know them first. She is very quiet when she is around strangers and she doesn't like to talk about her past too much. She is very artistic and knows how to get out of many situations. She is not a crier and she is not known to be overly happy. She can not stay still to save her life due to her ADD. 

Bio: TBH

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Aeliss-NovakThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 18, 2012 at 6:09 pm

((I was thinking maybe-if you don't mind- it could start when the girl gets kidnapped, and she's put in with Tory?))
 
Add-on to Bio: He doesn't know why he was picked, as his family isn't rich at all.

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Triumph replied...
Sept. 18, 2012 at 6:13 pm

((Sure thing!))

Nikki was walking home—well, back to tje orphanage that is, from school one day with her backpack on her two shoulders. She noticed a van was following her and she sped her pace. She was almost there, right? She could make it, or at least she hoped.

((Would you like to play the kidnappers?))

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Aeliss-NovakThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 18, 2012 at 6:20 pm

((Sure!))
 
"Is it ready?" Greg asked.
   "Yes," Jonathan answered, screwing the cap back on the bottle of chloraform. There was no one around but the girl: perfect.
    Greg pulled the van up next to her and Jonathan leaped out, grabbing Nikki's hair with one hand and forcing a soaked cloth in her face with the other.

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Sept. 18, 2012 at 6:23 pm

Nikki passed out, the weight of her backpack pulling her down with it and her hat cushioning her head. Her grey eyes closed and she went black, everything was so dark and cold, what was going on? Were there people talking about…about a kidnapping? She was dressed in a black pair of high-rise shorts, a Guns and Roses T-shirt that she had so gracefully cut the sleeves off of and her combat boots.

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Aeliss-NovakThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 18, 2012 at 6:29 pm

((My oldest brother cuts the sleevs off most of his shirts, sometimes the second he buys them. Once he jokingly asked if he could get a discount. XD))
 
Jonathan hauled her into the back of then van and Greg drove it away. Quickly and with practiced motions Jonathan gagged her with a rag and zip-tied her hands together, dropping the backpack on the floor of the van under her seat.
 
*skips forward 5 hours*
 
 
Tory stood up quickly when the two guys who had kidnapped him came into his small, stone room and dropped an unconcious girl on the floor, undoing her bonds. "Who's that?" he asked the bald one, Greg.
    He just laughed, "Money." then he was gone, locking the door behind him.

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Triumph replied...
Sept. 18, 2012 at 6:37 pm

Nikki woke up slowly and steadily, she tried to wrap her arms around an imaginary back pack that was obviously not there. She opened her grey eyes confusedly,"Where is it?",she asked as she peered into the distance. She stood up and brushed herself off,"Who are you? And what happened to your face?"
She couldn't help but to feel oddly concerned for the boy with the black eye. He was obviously a victim here,"How long have you been here?"
((My brother does that too! I only do it sometimes :P))

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Aeliss-NovakThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 18, 2012 at 6:42 pm

((I've never done it, but that's 'cuz I have to give my clothes to my younger sister when I outgrow them, and she wouldn't approve.))
 
"One at a time, will ya?" Tory said with a wry smile. He sighed and ran his hands through his dark curls, "My name is Tory. Tory Payne. The pimply one, I think his name is Jonathan, happened to my face, and I think it's been about three days." he sat down on the cold floor-there was no furniture, "Your turn."

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Triumph replied...
Sept. 18, 2012 at 6:47 pm

"My name's Nikki Dae, I was walking on the street when one of them grabbed me and they took my book bag.",Nikki confessed. She took her hat off her head and held it in her hands. "I sure hope that I don't anger any of them and we find a way out of here soon." She looked up to see a high window that was barred off. She tilted her head at it and then looked over at Tory with a mischevious smile,"Have you tried escaping?"

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Aeliss-NovakThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 18, 2012 at 6:51 pm

"Of course," Tory said poking his split lip, "Reopened this one yeserday when I tried to fight Baldy while he was bringing me dinner. I dislocated his shoulder, but he won." he glared at the door, "Cheater had a taser. I haven't eaten since."

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Triumph replied...
Sept. 18, 2012 at 6:56 pm

"Oh no, thats not the way to do it.",Nikki said as she shook her head back and forth,"You see those bars all the way up there?",she asked as she pointed,"If we could get him to bring you food again, we could reflect the sunlight off of something and burn the metal off of the window." She sighed desparately,"We'd need a magnifying glass for that, though."

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Aeliss-NovakThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 18, 2012 at 6:59 pm

"Those bars are pretty thick," Tory said, looking up at them sceptically, "We'd have to get all of them. It'd take forever. And even if it did work, only you'd fit through."

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Triumph replied...
Sept. 18, 2012 at 7:01 pm

Nikki grumbled as she sat down on the floor and pouted. "Well, I do not walk around without a book bag, so that's definitely something we're gonna have to get back. What about you? Did you have any possessions with you?",she asked.

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Aeliss-NovakThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 18, 2012 at 7:04 pm

"My school bag, cell phone, not much I really care about." he leaned his head against the wall, silent for a moment, "Are your parents rich?" he asked after a bit, then realized she might take that the wrong way.

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Triumph replied...
Sept. 18, 2012 at 7:06 pm

"I never had any parents.",Nikki told the boy as she began toying around with her hat,"I have no idea why they'd pick me off the side walk, the only money they might get are a few coins from the kids down at the orphanage." She looked up from her hat,"What are your parents like?"

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Aeliss-NovakThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 18, 2012 at 7:12 pm

"Oh, sorry," Tory said, thinking about what that would be like before answering her question, "They're always moving around. My dad will see some 'better' job three states away and off we'll go. I've only been in Iowa for five months. My mom hates it, but she doesn't complain much. I don't really get along with either of them."
 
((g2g.))

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