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iluvnachoThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 27, 2013 at 6:32 pm

"Maddie-?"Leo asked, stopping short as soon as her sweatshirt had revealed herself completely. His cheeks became a full on flush, and he felt his lips part open in surprise.

He had never seen Maddie this way. Ever. Karen, yes, but that was hardly a comparassion. His eyes took her in, before he looked away, his cheeks becoming a brighter red.

"I...uh..."Leo stammered, smiling a but nervously as he averted his eyes. Dámn her neon bright pink brá.

"Tonight." Persephone sighed, frowning at the look on June's face. So crestfallen and broken...

"Things will be okay."She walked closer, her fingers ruffling his hair like a sister."I hope they don't hurt you anymore. Really."

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Jan. 27, 2013 at 6:41 pm

Maddie turned to look at him curiously, tossing the sweatshirt on the floor. "Yes?" Then she noticed his bright blush, and quickly crawled back over to him, brow furrowed in concern.
 
"Leo?" She carefully felt his forehead. "You're blushing? Oh no, you aren't sick, are you?"
 
June leaned into Persephone's touch and closed his eyes; he couldn't remember feeling anything that soft and gentle before, and he was loving this.
 
"I'm sorry... I didn't mean to forget anything..." he murmured quietly, and even with his eyes closed it was easy to see how upset he was.

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Jan. 27, 2013 at 6:50 pm

Oh no...Maddie's bare skin was touching Leo. More than that, her boóbs were in a dangerous view, with the push up and all. He gulped nervously, before smiling meekly.

"Not sick."He reassured, forcing himself to look at her eyes, and only, her eyes. Even if her pale skin was very warm."Just ah...well...ah..."What exactly was Leo?


"Hey, it's not your fault." Persephone said, frowning still."I'll come back for you, June. I promise."

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Jan. 27, 2013 at 6:59 pm

"Are you sure?" Obviously Maddie wasn't convinced. Why did he look so nervous and blushy? And then a thought hit her. Was he trying to tell her he was fine just so she wouldn't worry about him being so sick?
 
She sighed. "Leo, you know you can tell me if something's wrong... Please don't try and pretend everything's okay when you're clearly feeling awful." Kiba had done that a few times, and it never turned out well.
 
Persephone had to be the first kind doctor June could ever remember meeting. And it was nice, having her touch him to nicely. He opened his eyes to look up at her, now a strange blue-green, like the ocean.
 
She was so pretty...

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Jan. 27, 2013 at 7:10 pm

"Awful!?" Leo repeated, his green eyes looking at her incredulously. Once again he got the sight of her chest, bringing on another wave of blush. He wanted to kiss every inch of her. Maddie's flat stomach, the indent of her collarbones...Just imagining the things made Leo feel like some sick twisted guy. Not to mention Maddie's wide eyed, innocent expression. Leo forced himself to calm down. It wasn't like it was the first time or anything. Except, this time it mattered. Seeing so much of her.

"Maddie...I don't feel awful."Leo explained, his hands caressing her cheeks."Really. It's just that...I'm seeing so much of you."He smiled sheepishly, flushing."It's...great, and nice and new but...wow." Wonderful. Leo was a total idiot, wasn't he?

Persephone recognized that look. It made her step back, getting that frown again.

"Elias loves you, and we'll be back tonight. Promise." Persephone really hated leaving him, especially since she knew he was probably going to get hurt. By she needed to leave."Promise."

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Jan. 27, 2013 at 7:28 pm

"So... much of me..?" Maddie blinked a few times, unsure of what to say, or do, or think. This was weird, confusing. Mostly weird. No one had ever looked at her like that before, but now Leo was, and she had no idea what he was thinking.
 
"Is... I'm... Huh?" Was he forcing himself to not look anywhere but her face? Why? Was the rest of her not very pretty? Should she not have taken the sweatshirt off? She huffed poutily, frowning as her looked herself over; thin arms, small stomach... Maybe it was the pink on her bra?
 
She fiddled with the strap a little and looked back up at him. "Should... Should I take this off too? Do you not like pink?"
 
June's eyes grew wide, like a child that might cry. "You... you're leaving? Right now?" This amazing, pretty, nice doctor was already about to leave him? "No, please don't go yet," he begged, his hands clutching the sheets tightly. "Please?"

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Jan. 27, 2013 at 8:19 pm

"What? No--no, I love pink!" Leo answered hastily. Just imaging Maddie taking her brà off brought an even deeper flush to his face. Maddie was getting the wrong impression. She was taking it as if Leo didn't think she was beautiful. He could see it in he eyes, and on again, he took her face in his hands, gazing in her blue eyes. They were the color of ice, right after it had melted.

"Maddie, you are the most beautiful girl I have ever seen."Leo said the words with honesty, and having her breásts touch his chest made his heart beat very very very fast."Honestly. Everything about you is perfect. It's just that...well, girls wait a very long time for taking their clothes off."He paused, trying his best to explain. "I mean if you're comfortable with it..."Abruptly, Kiba's accusing glare flashed in Leo's mind. "Nevermind. Maybe you should put your sweatshirt back on. I just don't want to take advantage of you." She was so warm, and Leo traced his lips around her own before he pulled away, his pupils very big.
"Do you understand, Maddie?" He asked."On how beautiful I think you are, but why we should wait a little longer until you ah...start taking your clothes off?" The last thing Leo wanted to do was hurt her feelings.

"June..."Persephone worried, a troubled look on his face."I'm not safe here. I'm not even really a doctor--you know that." Or did he? Her expression became more torn, especially at the look he was giving her. Must he look so helpless? "I need to get back to the others."Even if they were furious."I need to tell Elias that you're safe. He's really worried about you. If I could stay here, I would."

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Jan. 27, 2013 at 9:33 pm

"Oh..." Maddie still didn't really understand. Not in the slightest. But it was probably one of those outside-world things, like TV and houses and makeup. She sighed; one more thing she didn't understand about Leo's world. Would she never figure everything out?
 
"I, um... okay..." Huh. Leo's pupils had really dialated, hadn't they... Maddie furrowed her brow. Dialation was usually caused by an increase in endorphins, right? And an increase in endorphins made people really happy, and in some cases... Her eyes widened and she blushed madly. "Wha... You... Oh, no..." She quickly grabbed her sweatshirt and pulled it back on, which was hard since her hands were shaking from embarrassment. "Oh, Leo, I'm so sorry," she said, covering her reddened face with her hands. "I didn't realise you were... You were... So that's what made you blush..."
 
"You're not a doctor..?" Now June was more than confused. "But... You have a badge and everything..." He shook his head, closing his eyes as they started to burn. Who was he kidding; she didn't want to stay with him. He had never known love before - at least not that he could remember - and he never would. "Fine," he muttered, "Go."

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Jan. 27, 2013 at 9:51 pm

[ Oh my goodness, Maddie cracks me up xD I love her!]

"You don't have to be sorry."Leo chuckled, breathless as she began to pull her shirt back on. Oh man. That was a lot. A lot a lot. He smiled his loving smile of his as she covered her face. How many times would she do that? Silly girl.

"Really, it's alright sweetie."Leo reassure comfortingly, taking her hands down to see her eyes and reddened face."It's okay. You're still learning."He rubbed his nose against hers, close to her face."And so am I."

"Please, don't look that way." Persephone moaned miserably."I don't want to leave you June, but I could be killed."She flinched as the sound of the terrifying truth."Please, understand-"Persephone was cut off by the door opening. Great. The doctors were back.

But it who walked through the doors was much worse than the doctors.

It was Xenos.

Persephone's heart lurched into an overtime of fear, and her blue eyes scanned the room. The lines made her dizzy, but in a point of luck, she ducked under a nearby table, the cloth hiding her as it hung down.

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Jan. 27, 2013 at 10:03 pm

[Lol, I feel so bad for Leo... Poor guy XDD ]
 
"It's not okaaaayyyyyyy," Maddie whined, so embarrassed she could die. Right now, all she wanted to do was disappear into thin air, never to be seen again.
 
She huffed, looking like a pouty little kid. "So mean," she muttered, although thatwas a total lie; Leo was one of the nicest people ever. "Making me all... Ehhh... And you were all... And you're really cute when you blush, but I didn't get it till it was too late... Wayyyyy too late... And now I can never take my shirt off again... I'll just have to sweat to death... So mean..."
 
June's eyes widened considerably as Xenos walked in the room. Xenos, of all people. Of all people, This was the guy June could remember?
 
How great was that.
 
But at least he knew what to expect; there was always some kind of pain involved. "Ah... Hello..?" He managed to fake a smile.  "What brings you here?"

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Jan. 27, 2013 at 10:13 pm

[Hahaha I really want Persephone and Maddie to have some more girl talk xD ]

"You can always take your shirt off."Leo offered with a wink, siting criss crossed across from her. She was so adorable when embarrassed. He wanted to cuddle her close to him, and kiss the top of her shoulders, then her neck, then up to her lips. So...Leo did just that.

"You,"He pressed his lips onto her pale shoulders revealed by the oversized sweater,"Are,"The continued on her neck, trailing softly,"Perfect."Leo concluded, kissing her lips sweetly, before he pulled away."Don't ever forget that." Leo then paused, his brows furrowing as they found a tattoo of numbers. He raised a curious brow, his green eyes only interested. Maddie was still beyond beautiful, no matter how many scars or tattoos she had.

"I was told you were being difficult."Xenos replied, his tone an evil coo. His brown eyes gleamed as they fell on June. Such a pretty little boy. Even of Elias was better, June would have to do. The man wasn't in a good mood to begin with. Not after losing him, and Maddie, and Kiba.

"You know how much I hate it when you're difficult, June."Xenos continued, walking towards the boy with a needle. It was filled with green liquid. The stuff the doctors were trying to give June before. Persephone was trembling with terror, holding her breath as she heard Xenos' footsteps.

"I saw your lover last night."He continued on to June. Tauntingly, he smiled."It's a shame he got away, hm?"Xenos flicked the needle, before he pushed it into June's left vein running up his arm.

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Jan. 27, 2013 at 10:35 pm

[Ohmygosh, I know lol... That would be... fantastic lol ]
 
Maddie felt her breath catch sharply and closed her eyes; this was new. She had never been kissed anywhere other than her face before, but this... This was... wow.
 
"Perfect..." she whispered, finally forcing herself to look at Leo with half-lidded eyes. Those darn endorphins... "I'm not perfect, Leo. I wish I was, but... If anyone here is perfect, it's you, alwaysx so nice and pretty and never able to hurt anyone..."
 
What was he looking at? The numbers? She glanced at them, then gave him a shy smile. "Identification number. That's what they call me in the lab. I don't have a name there."
 
"D-difficult..?" June swallowed hard, still eyeing Xenos warily. The only thing predictable about this guy was that he would hurt you whenever he had the chance.
 
And that's what he did now.
 
June waited till the burn in his arm decreased enough for him to speak. Oh, how it burned... "My... lover..." He grimaced as the pain began to spread throughout his arm. "I don't have a lover, Xenos... Sorry..." Oh God, this hurt...

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Jan. 27, 2013 at 10:49 pm

"2089014684." Leo said the numbers outloud experimentally, wrinkling his nose at how they sounded."I can't see it. You're Maddie and only Maddie to me."Leo nodded with a smile against his lips. The smile he only gave to her. It turned thoughtful at her response to him calling her perfect.

"Maybe we make we each other perfect." Leo offered as an explanation. This close, he began to notice things he hadn't noticed before. Two earnings in each ear--did Kiba have those too?--and most interestingly, a strand of red in her hair. He took the colored pieces between his finger, amused."Nice. Did you do this, or Kiba?" Maddie didn't seem like the type to dye her hair, but anything would look good on her.

"That hurts, doesn't it?"Xenos asked with a certain tone of glee. Persephone could hear the undertone of joy, and she cringed, hating being so close to this monster.

"And I believe you do have a lover. Elias. Remember how he left you?"Again, Xenos seemed to be enjoying the pain he was inflicting on the boy. Emotionally and physically."You're memory will come back, don't you worry. And when it does,"Xenos smiled viciously,"You're going to wish it was still gone."And with that, just for the heck of it, he slapped the boy. Hard. Seph heard it's sharp sound, and winced."Ta Ta for now, June." And with that, Xenos left.

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Jan. 27, 2013 at 11:07 pm

Those numbers sounded too weird coming from Leo's mouth, and Maddie laughed a little. "You make it sound funny... You're voice is too nice. It doesn't fit."
 
Ah, the red in her hair... "Oh, that was Kiba... He did these, too," she explained, twisting her earrings around a little. "If you think this stuff is strange, you should've seen Kiba's own body... Wow." She shook her head, smiling. "His hair kind of short, blonde, and he keeps it sort of spiked up in the front. And he had really pretty green eyes. And I think... hold on..." Furrowing her brow, she silently began counting on her fingers. "Four piercings on the left--" She tapped her left ear - "And five, I think, on the right."
 
June watched Xenos leave, pain clear on his face. Now the sting and burn was coursing through his bloodstream, and every heartbeat mad it worse.
 
"What his he even talking about..?" he muttered softly to himself, still confused on the whole Elias thing. Elias left him? When? How? Why? His head was spinning, and the drugs and the striped walls weren't helping. He could only vaguely feel the sting where Xenos slapped him, a red mark beginning to show.

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Jan. 27, 2013 at 11:17 pm

[Awwwh I hope they can get separated :c And then Seph and Maddie can really have some bonding time :) ]

"Really?" He couldn't imagine Kiba blonde, or really any different way than he knew he was now. He watched in admiration as Maddie had to count on her fingers. How was he so lucky to have her? Leo reached over to push some hair behind her ear again. It kept falling by her face, but he loved putting it back in place."I hope you two can get your own bodies back." Leo added, taking the top of her hand and pressing his lips against the top of it. A small knock then came on the door. Elias poked his head in, looking apologetic and miserable at the same time.

"I'm sorry."He whimpered, his eyes red. Leo straightened up, concerned."I just...I just can't be alone."Elias confessed, his hands deep in his pockets as he stared at the two. He hated interrupting their happiness, but Elias couldn't pull out any more feathers because Maddie would get upset, and his nails were chewed to stubs."I'm really sorry."

"Oh Gód, your lip is bleeding June."Persephone came out from under the table, grabbing a cloth and pressing it against the torn skin. Her blue eyes were anxious, and sad."I'm so sorry that díck did that to you. You poor thing." This was horrible.

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Jan. 27, 2013 at 11:37 pm

[Yes! And Kiba and Leo could have some I-can't-stand-your-f***ing-guts time lol ]

"Yeah, I hope so too..." Maddie murmured, blushing every time Leo touched her in any way at all. Why did he always have such a crazy effect on her like this? So embarrassing...

And then Elias walked in, looking like... well, like June's absence was killing him. Was it, in a way? Maddie felt a painful lump in her throat as she forced herself to be calm; no need for another crying jag.

"Elias..." she coaxed softly, reaching toward him. "Come here, come sit with us. It's okay, no need to be sorry."

June didn't move as Persephone dabbed at his lip. He was bleeding? He hadn't even noticed. But it didn't really matter. He kept his eyes turned away from her, his eyes brooding and stormy as he stared at the wall, starting to get used to the pain already. "I'm fine."

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Jan. 27, 2013 at 11:39 pm

[Yes! And Kiba and Leo could have some I-can't-stand-your-f-ing-guts time lol ]
 
"Yeah, I hope so too..." Maddie murmured, blushing every time Leo touched her in any way at all. Why did he always have such a crazy effect on her like this? So embarrassing...
 
And then Elias walked in, looking like... well, like June's absence was killing him. Was it, in a way? Maddie felt a painful lump in her throat as she forced herself to be calm; no need for another crying episode.
 
"Elias..." she coaxed softly, reaching toward him. "Come here, come sit with us. It's okay, no need to be sorry."
 
June didn't move as Persephone dabbed at his lip. He was bleeding? He hadn't even noticed. But it didn't really matter. He kept his eyes turned away from her, his eyes brooding and stormy as he stared at the wall, starting to get used to the pain already. "I'm fine."

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Jan. 27, 2013 at 11:51 pm

[ lol or maybe, just maybe, some "understanding" between them? Haha :) ]

"I didn't want to rip out anymore feathers."Elias explained in a sniff, hesitantly sitting on the edge of the bed. It was a good thing it was big. Just crossing his legs, he felt like he took up half the space.

"It's alright, man."Leo reassured, offering a smile to the guy. He looked like something was actually weighing him down. Then again, if Maddie was in the lab, Leo would of probably looked the same way. It was hard not to feel sorry for him, especially as he softly let his wings expand.

"I just--it's so hard not knowing--"Elias cut himself off, gulping as he began to tie more knots with the string Leo gave to him earlier. His fingers were red he had been doing it so much. Leo frowned. He was still very anxious for Persephone's return.

"I just don't know what to do with myself."Elias muttered, sighing as he continued tying intricate knots, and then untying them repeatedly."If June saw how pathetic I was without him..."His thin voice faltered.

"June, I'm so sorry."Persephone was muttering, feeling even more guiltier. She had to leave even more than before now."I promise, I'm coming back for you, okay?"Quickly, she pecked him on the forehead for comfort, before hurrying out of the room. Seph would never forget the look on his face. Ever.

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Jan. 28, 2013 at 12:05 am

[Maybe... Kiba's pretty stubborn though lol. But they're gonna have to work this stuff out eventually, hopefully lol ]
 
It was horrible, seeing Elias like this. Maddie watched his fingers moving for a moment, studying the movements silently, mostly because she had no idea what to say, or if she was supposed to say anything at all.
 
She kept ahold of Leo's hand as she leaned over and rested her head delicately against Elias's shoulder. He didn't even have the same normal body temperature; he felt much cooler, nowhere near as warm.
 
"Elias," she whispered, "You're worrying yourself sick... June will be okay. Don't worry. I'm sure he'll still be the same old June when he comes back to see you. I mean, remember how excited he was to see you last night? Just think - it'll be just the same when he comes back."
 
"Okay..." June whispered, but she was already gone. He could tell without even looking; he was still staring at the wall, pain and sadness and confusion written all over his face as a tear fell in silence.

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Jan. 28, 2013 at 12:18 am

[Awh little does Maddie know about June now :( and yeah, Persephone will make him haha xD the two most stubborn people paired together ]

Elias nodded at Maddie's words. Even leaning on his shoulder, she had the most gentlest touch. Probably because she knew what pain felt like the most.

"June loves you, Elias."Leo chimed in. It was really sad, to see him so broken up over this."Things will be okay." It was easy for him to say, though, wasn't it? Suddenly the door opened and closed. No one had time to move before Persephone came through the door, breathless.

Scream things then happened at once. Leo stood up, and so did Elias. Elias got to her first though, wings fully outstretched and blocking Leo from even seeing her.

"Where's June? Is he alright? Is he alive?"Elias demanded frantically, his brown eyes wild and hands holding tightly to Seph's shoulders.

"June is alive. He's fine."Persephone quickly replied, even if it was kind of a lie. She had to talk to Kiba. And fast. Elias let go of her, letting the information sink in. June was fine. And alive. It seemed to sink through, slowly. It filled him with a tiny comfort.

"What the hèll Persephone!?" Leo yelled, his eyes a stormy hazel. Seph didn't even seem scared; at the thought, Leo but his lower lip. He didn't want to freak Maddie out again. "Do you have any idea that you could of been killed?" Elias winced at the word, now sitting on the floor and continuing to tie mindless knots.

"Maddie, I'm really sorry, but can you change into Kiba?"Persephone asked the girl, hardly paying attention to Leo. He would deal with his fury later. She would deserve it.

"What? Seph, what gives you the right-!"Leo was cut off by her quickly.

"Look, Leonardo, I'm sorry I went there, okay? I know it was stupid, irresponsible, and selfish to put you through that. But, I need to talk to Kiba. I can explain things later. I'm sorry." She then turned to Maddie."Can I talk to him, then you can come right back?"

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