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Cutey-Beauty posted this thread...
Apr. 16, 2013 at 7:29 am

So...I like thought-provoking things...I'll read anything you give me and comment on it :) 

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MckayThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 17, 2013 at 3:11 pm

Hey, I'd love your feedback on anything I've written. You choose whatever. I'll return the favor. 

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swat17 replied...
Apr. 17, 2013 at 3:57 pm

Hey, can you comment on and rate my Educator of the year piece? I'd really appreciate it, thanks!

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Cutey-Beauty replied...
Apr. 18, 2013 at 10:12 am

Sorry swat17, I couldn't find your educator of the year piece? But I did read your stacy hallmark piece and enjoyed it a lot.
McKay, I love your amount of poetry. You're very, very good. Especially with descriptions and details (which you will no doubt hear often). 
Both of you are so amazzzing :)

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LexiDawn replied...
Apr. 19, 2013 at 5:39 pm

You can read anything I've written and give feedback if you would like to.

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Cutey-Beauty replied...
Apr. 20, 2013 at 6:06 am

 
"chalice" "fire" "sinful" "thirst", for some reason I thought this was about a vampire when I started reading lol. But it could really be about anyone. Quite scary in a way, yet not completely creepy. Just beautiful, I think. That's my personal opinion :)
I loved this line: "Pondering over her thoughts, all alone" and "She quenches her thirst for revenge"...

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CheshireCat3 replied...
Apr. 20, 2013 at 9:55 am

Thanks so much Cutey-Beauty! Truly appreciate your feedback!

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Laugh-it-OutThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 21, 2013 at 7:23 pm

could you take a look at my peices Gir on Fire (very thought oriented) and As the World Goes On (VERY thought provoking) cool thx!

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Apr. 24, 2013 at 10:59 am

Would you please read my only personal narrative "Underwater Perceptions"? It's the only thing I've written and I really want feedback. I'll do the same for you, if you want. Thanks!

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Cutey-Beauty replied...
Jun. 27, 2013 at 9:28 am

Great job LaughItOut and Princess ;) I really enjoyed reading both of your pieces.

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D0rkl0rd replied...
Jul. 2, 2013 at 11:16 am

If you could please post a comment on my memoir, "Me and Joe", it would be much appreciated. I woulnd't call it Though-Provoking, but it is interesting.

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jhhelena replied...
Jul. 14, 2013 at 10:05 am

Hi, I'd appreciate if you could read and comment on either of my pieces. Both I'd say are pretty thought provoking.

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tragic-poet replied...
Jul. 15, 2013 at 2:48 am

Can I get feeback on my poem DO YOU WANT OUT OF YOUR SKIN? Its in the forums. Thanks!

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guardianofthestarsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 24, 2013 at 8:28 pm

WOuld you mind looking into my short story Saving Humanity?

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BlackbeltJamesThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 31, 2013 at 9:09 am

Hey, I'd really appreciate some feedback (and a rating if you don't mind). I'll be grateful for any feedback you can give, but prefrably at least my two newest pieces: "Belly Of The Beast" and "The Departing Oak". If there is anything else that catches your eye then please feel free to read it, I try to make a lot of my stories very thought provoking and with good twists, so you might like them.

Thanks :)

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OldYoungOne replied...
Jul. 31, 2013 at 5:54 pm

I would appreciate it if you read all my work btu you can read my things last seeign as things are still goign through the process of beign accpeted.

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Cutey-Beauty replied...
Aug. 1, 2013 at 1:12 pm

Hey, you two amazing writers DOrklOrd and jhhelena, finished rating and commenting on the pieces you asked me to rate and comment on! KEEP WRITING :D @jhhelena, you had 4 things, one was a photograph, I chose to read "Yes, No, So...Maybe" and the "I Can Be Whatever I Want To Be"...uh not sure if that was the original title, but you know what I mean ;)

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MeganF replied...
Aug. 2, 2013 at 8:48 pm

Hi everyone! 
I'm new to TeenInk and I would love some feedback on my opinion piece on Sparknotes, "Friend or Foe?". I'd also love it if you could check out "Quiescence" and "Everlasting".
Feel free to comment!!
Best, 
Megan

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Cutey-Beauty replied...
Aug. 4, 2013 at 2:08 pm

Great job D0rkl0rd and jhhelena!!! :)

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Cutey-Beauty replied...
Aug. 4, 2013 at 2:12 pm

tragic-poet, I truly loved your poem and guardianofthestars, as you well know, I adored your sci-fi piece...you 2 are amazing :D

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