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Mar. 5 at 11:57 pm

take away everything i have
send me into a depressed state
think you have it all figured out
break me down till i am nothing
in control, but quickly fading.
 
every sound turns to silence
every blow ringing in my mind
every shout echos off the walls
when will you see what you are doing?
 
push me down again and again
bring out the worst in me...
think about the pain you cause
taking me down is just so easy
far from grace, and slowly falling.
 
every sound turns to silence
every blow ringing in my mind
every shout echos off the walls
when will you see how much i am hurting?
 
 

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