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i just wish i would've known

writerauterThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. posted this thread...
Feb. 1, 2013 at 7:18 pm

she walked to the store with him
leaving me behind, my heart broken
she kissed him so passionatly, right by me
making my blood boil and my heart to stone
she never mentioned his firey, bad temper
i just wish i would have known...
 
he hit her more times than i can count
he took advantage of a wonderful girl
he knew she just wanted to be loved
i know i messed up, i let her down
but she was the best girl i had ever found
how could you he do that to her?
he made her lie down ice cold, but still wont care.
 
she held hands with him so tight
leaving me hurt, my mind spinning
she gave herself to him, no holding back
making my breath freeze in the air
she never told anyone, what he had done
i just wish i would've known...
 
if i would've known...she would be alright
she would still be here in my arms
she would have never went with him
she would still be alive...and well
but i didnt know...
 

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