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writerauterThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. posted this thread...
Dec. 28, 2012 at 3:27 pm

when i first met you i was starstruck 
everything about you shined and sparkled
it was like i was in a Hollywood movie
whenever we went somewhere together
when you laughed i had to laugh too
whenever you walked away you always came back.
 
so what has happened here?
why are you acting like this?
what is going on right now?
have you lost your mind?
tell me please, do you love me?
because a romance is turning into a horror movie.
 
when i last saw you i was crying
everything bright was fading to grey
you were yelling and glaring at me
it was like we were in a drama movie
when you first pushed me it was slow motion
when you looked away i lost faith in you
whenever you were like that you always apologized.
 
what has happened here?
why are you acting like this?
what is going on right now?
have you lost your mind?
tell me please, do you want me?
because a pg 13 has turned into an R rated movie.
 
why are you doing this to me?
you said you loved me.
why did you lie to me?
you said i was safe with you.
why are you still trying to convince me?
you should of never let me fall.
and you should know...
this feels like a movie, not real
like someone else's sad story
i can't accept what has happened
how could you tear me all apart?
this feels like a movie.

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