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writerauterThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. posted this thread...
Sept. 18, 2012 at 9:06 pm

say those things to me

say and do them

do what you want

but what really bugs me

what really gets to me

is not only what you say or do

but also its the fact that

whenever i react to it

you always shrug it off

and say you were just joking

well I've told you before

and of course, i must tell you again...



your "jokes" aren't funny to me

your "jokes" aren't really even jokes at all

there mean or hurtful things

that you are too proud or ashamed

to tell me that your "sorry" for

so you say they are "jokes" instead

somehow it makes sense to you

somewhere in your twisted head

but it will never make sense to me

you never even really loved me

you say you did and still do

but i don't believe a word

i don't trust you at all

you've let me down too much

instead of catching me

you let me fall.



walk away and tell me I'm wrong

you will always be this way

you think you are so right

and you always have to be

well I'm not taking it anymore

I'm glad you said goodbye

wish you could get your head straight

but you cant, and I'm not surprised

but ill admit something to you

that I'm not quite over you

but don't you worry

i soon will be

ill have a hot man by my side

and watch your jealousy inside

oh, how I'll love to ruin your pride





so take a few steps back

now take twenty steps back more

take a deep breath

because I'm about to

blow you away with a rush

you think i am still so easy

think ill take you back

you are so wrong there

your gone

we're done

deal with it.

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zendayaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 28, 2012 at 10:25 am

i have been looking for a poem to read that kinda tells how my break up was and how my ex treated me and when i found this one by you i feel inlove with it and it is how he was i love it

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writerauterThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 28, 2012 at 11:36 pm

thanks. im really glad my break up could be related to someone else. that is a big part of why i write about my personal experiences. :) be strong, you deserve better than that. 

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