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writerauterThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. posted this thread...
Sept. 9, 2012 at 6:48 pm

there are alot of things on my mind
life is speeding on by
things i prayed would never happen
happened
and i'm left crying alone
i'll never forget the day you walked out the door
said you were coming back
but you never did
you left us all alone with him
without you i'm not complete
every girl needs a mommy
 
i wont forget
your favorite color is purple
your favorite flower is lavender
you adore little children
you love to go shopping
janice is your best friend
and i wont forget
he made you leave me 
he made you so sad
he made you feel so helpless
you shouldve told us
you planned on dying
we wouldve helped you!
we all loved you, and still do
mabey he didnt
but i guess we werent enough
to keep you on this earth
mom i forgive you for leaving
i know you couldnt live
with what you were feeling
but i wont forgive him, i cant
for anything he did
he didnt just hurt you mom
he hurt us too
over and over
he lied about your letter
he wouldnt let me read it
after you died
he was angrier all the time
why did you leave?
we neeeded you
i miss you
every girl needs a mommy
 
ive been looking towards heaven
alot lately actually
asking god why
he took you home
when he knew i needed you more
im sorry ive let you down
mom, if i wouldve known
just how much pain you were in
i would of helped
you could of leaned on me!
i love you
why did you have to leave?!
i know im being repetitive
but i just want to make sure you hear me
i wont forget
your gentle hugs
and homemade mugs of hot chocolate
and the scent of your lavender perfume
and the way your eyes lit up
whenever you smiled
i have two questions
whats it like to be dead?
and do you know dad got arrested?
that if you had just waited a little while
he didnt get away with any of it
i wont forget
you are kind
you are awesome
you are beautiful
you are sweet
i wont foget
your favorite animal
is a colorful parrot
but most of all
i wont forget
your love for us, all your adopted kids
and that book you used to read at bedtime
that read:
i'll love you forever
i'll like you for always
as long as i'm living
my baby you'll be
well heres my version
i'll love you forever
i'll like you for always
as long as i'm living
my mommy you'll be
i love you so much
i wont forget
and mom...
i hope you wont ethier.

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singoutloudThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 30, 2012 at 9:34 am

This deserves to be published in more then just Teen Ink! You have such strong emotians and it shows! This is such a real piece. It made me cry. Keep up the good work!

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writerauterThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 30, 2012 at 11:26 am

thanks. it is really emotial...i was crying when i was writiting it. i just wanted to write this so that she could finally hear all i am feeling about it. thanks,, and i will keep writing forever, its my whole world! :) thanks again. <3

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