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When my Savior Comes for Me

Angel8 posted this thread...
Oct. 21, 2011 at 9:20 am

Could it be, Could it be

My Savior coming for me

I will be free, I will be free

From the devil that wants me,

Why does he want me?

I will never know

But soon I will be set free

Cause my Savior is coming for me,

Could it be, Could it be

My Savior standing in front of me

I can see, I can see

My Savior coming for me

When my Savior comes for me

The devil will not want me

Cause I will be set free

After my Savior has come for me

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Little.Miss replied...
Oct. 21, 2011 at 3:59 pm

This is pretty good. I'm assuming it's a Christian poem, and God is the savior? That's what it seems like, and I like it!

Would you return the favor of a comment/rating on my article, One State at a Time? It's posted on my page.

Thanks! :)

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Angel8 replied...
Sept. 11, 2012 at 8:21 am

yes, it is a christian poem. Thank you. and i will once i find it

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TaylurNiccole replied...
Sept. 12, 2012 at 10:26 am

I love it. (:

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Tusillody replied...
Sept. 20, 2012 at 1:40 am

Even though this is the nonfiction section, and I believe this belongs in the poetry, I like this. Im Atheist, but the poem doesnt have to be taken as a christian poem. The 'devil' may be just a problem and the savior someone who comes to help. I like it, it flows nicely, and the meaning is nice. :)

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JadaA replied...
Sept. 21, 2012 at 1:38 pm

This poem is actually very good. When I first read it made me think of the Lord and all that he could do.

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CollegeEssays replied...
Oct. 28, 2012 at 11:12 am

I like the format of it and the basic idea but I feel like the concept is too simple. I am a christian and I feel like you could've added to that.

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