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Oct. 21, 2011 at 9:20 am
Could it be, Could it be
My Savior coming for me
I will be free, I will be free
From the devil that wants me,
Why does he want me?
I will never know
But soon I will be set free
Cause my Savior is coming for me,
Could it be, Could it be
My Savior standing in front of me
I can see, I can see
My Savior coming for me
When my Savior comes for me
The devil will not want me
Cause I will be set free
After my Savior has come for me
Oct. 21, 2011 at 3:59 pm
This is pretty good. I'm assuming it's a Christian poem, and God is the savior? That's what it seems like, and I like it!
Would you return the favor of a comment/rating on my article, One State at a Time? It's posted on my page.
Thanks! :)
Sept. 11, 2012 at 8:21 am
yes, it is a christian poem. Thank you. and i will once i find it
Sept. 20, 2012 at 1:40 am
Even though this is the nonfiction section, and I believe this belongs in the poetry, I like this. Im Atheist, but the poem doesnt have to be taken as a christian poem. The 'devil' may be just a problem and the savior someone who comes to help. I like it, it flows nicely, and the meaning is nice. :)
Sept. 21, 2012 at 1:38 pm
This poem is actually very good. When I first read it made me think of the Lord and all that he could do.
Oct. 28, 2012 at 11:12 am
I like the format of it and the basic idea but I feel like the concept is too simple. I am a christian and I feel like you could've added to that.
