4th place: Soles (2 rates/comments)
3rd place: Elementary (3 rates/comments)
2nd place: Get Back Up Again (4 rates/comments)
1st place: A Cage in the Sky (5 rates/comments)
Unexpected Honorable Mention: The Pep Talk (1 rate/comment)
Reply here with what you want rates and comments on! Congratulations! :)
Yay!!!! I got something! Um, could you rate/coment on the only two other things on my page? Thanks!
I've already read The Slave's Secret, so is there anything you haven't yet posted that you'd like feedback on?
Yay!!! :D Thanks, Athena!! For my readings please check out: To Make a Difference, Downfall, 'A' Stands for Angel, and, She WIll Never be Pretty.
Thanks again and congrats to all the winners!!!!
Um, yea there is one peice, it's not long, so I'll just post it here.
What I love
Your powerful strides
Accompanied with the bulging muscles
Your amber coat
So silky, smoothing out from my hand
Your stamping hoofs
Impatient at being kept from your food
Your swiveling ears
As I spill my biggest secrets
Taking the treat from my hand
Your big brown eyes
Gazing at me intently
Of things smaller than you
Thank you so much, Athena! :)
GreekGoddess: You've officially made me love horses. I mean, I loved them before, but seriously, I really want a horse now (not that that will ever happen...) you've taken the traditional love poem and twisted it sucessfully, and it's wonderful. 5 stars :)
Jade.I.Am: I'm assuming, then, that you'd just like me to rate/comment on random pieces on your page?
You can comment on whatever you'd like, yeah. Sorry didnt know I was supposed to clarify :)
Yay!!! It was obvious that it was a horse :), and thanks!