Hi everyone, I've finished working on a short story, but I can't come up with an appropriate title. I don't want something that gives away the plot, but I want it to make sense with the story.
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If you give me a suggestion I'll rate a piece of your work. If I choose your suggestion, I'll rate two pieces, and comment on one work of your choice.
I thought of a few. I think 'Double-Crosser' would be the best. A lot of the terms you used in the story would work well, too: The Voice of the Underground, or The Crash of 2014, or even just Tabasco Sent Me.
How about, Books Beneath the City? or Paper Spider?
Thanks for all your suggestions! I think I've decided to call my story "Fatal Balance." Randomscreennamelalalala, you get the prize, because you sort of gave me the idea of playing up the betrayal aspect. What do you want me to comment on? (I've done all the rates.)
Thanks again, everyone.
How about: theidiots guide to betrayel
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