GRAND PRIZE (5 comments and ratings)- I'm walking down a path all alone ; SparksFlyWithMe
FIRST PLACE (4 comments and ratings): TIE BETWEEN: If you traveled down the blue highway in my mind; HisPurePrincess AND Forgotten Worlds; AthenaMarisaDeterminedbyFate
SECOND PLACE(3 comments and ratings)-The Road; Ethereal
THIRD PLACE (2 comments and ratings)- "The Library" ; SilentlyRising
RUNNER UP (1 comment and rating)-My Beach; LinkinPark12
woohoo! thanks, and congrats to everyone who joined, you all did a really great job. Anyway, just check out whatever you like on my page.
YAAAAAAY!! Thanks, and great job to SparksFlyWithMe! I would ask you to check out Fire and Ice, but I entered that in your Any Story Contest. I guess I'd like you to read The Coffee Shop, My Own Chapter of the Book of the Dead, One Misty Summer Morning, and, once it's published on teenink, Let the Mountains Speak. Thank you!
oh- yeah. sorry about that
Congratuations to all of the winners!! You can choose whichever poem/story catches your interest. Some (okay most) of the stories are older pieces of mine, back from when I was a wee slip of a lass, so please be mindful of the horrible job I did of creating new paragraphs when someone new speaks. You'll find that is what is most commented on. Thanks and great job to everyone!
Woohoo I was a runner up :)
Oh and please comment&rate "I wear it ":) thanks
Once upon a time I hated you,
you told me it could never be true.
I said you've hurt me too deep to be healed
you said my inner feelings would weald.
now I have a message that you must hear:
know I’m not your ghost anymore
even if I’m the toy you love the most.
know that I don’t love you
you think the horror you created is a
forgotten world but I will always remember.
my feelings for you are cold as December.
I know that you're just using me.
Your words are meaningless
your actions are useless
I will never forgive you for what you have done.
I’m not the bag that lands your punches
I’m not the parachute that breaks your fall
I’m not yours, so give me up.
This letter is my sweet escape
but for I’m afraid it’s only hate.
If you still choose me so be it.
Sorry! This is closed! We've already had the winners! If you are interested in this kind of contest there are two others like it open. It is the 2nd and 3rd 5 word contest. They are open!
To close the windows to the soul To make a sweet escape Into the forgotten world of dreams Into a satisfying deep sleep Outside a harsh December snow reigns Outside the hatred of the world whirls about Inside the warmth glows Inside an enduring fire slowly burns So be it Sleep, the haven for cowards of reality So be it Sleep, a haven for all
Slowly traversing across a blue highway Slipping away from the city of greed The highway, a sweet escape from claustrophobia The relieving isolation in the car Just the radio, the car, and I Cradled in the car So be it Where will the highway take us?