Can some one please read my article "You Really Love Me?" And of course if you want feed back on any of your articles I'll be glad to give it. Thanks! :D
yeah, but how do I look at it from here?
Post a link?
I read your story. I think there is room for improvement but it is still a great story. I gave you suggestions on how to improve it in the comments section
I'd love it if you gave me feedback on my article Azonto Invasion
Saw your story. The end is sweet but I felt the start was somewhat rushed. Maybe this was just me, but I didn't fully understand the characters. It's still a nice piece though and I'd surely read any other pieces you might've done.
Also, could you please check out my piece "Dear Mom"?
I checked out your article and left a comment! Please check out my poem TeenInk.com/poetry/song_lyrics/article/599319/Mended/
The overall concept was really sweet and the writing in general was good. However, I did find a few typos, grammatical errors, and in the future, you may want to avoud text talk in stories (i.e. "R u") but aside from that it was really good and I enjoyed reading it. I would greatly appreciate it if you would read any of my stories or poems and give me feedback on it and I hope I did not offend you in any way.
I read your story. Would you mind checking out my story "Molly Marrionette"?