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Lilly_Cat posted this thread...
Dec. 10, 2013 at 9:55 am

Can some one please read my article "You Really Love Me?" And of course if you want feed back on any of your articles I'll be glad to give it. Thanks! :D

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Savannahbookworm replied...
Dec. 25, 2013 at 8:28 pm

yeah, but how do I look at it from here?
Post a link?

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EvetteT replied...
Dec. 27, 2013 at 9:55 pm

 
I read your story.  I think there is room for improvement but it is still a great story. I gave you suggestions on how to improve it in the comments section

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EvetteT replied...
Dec. 27, 2013 at 9:56 pm

 
I'd love it if you gave me feedback on my article Azonto Invasion

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MissRucaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Dec. 28, 2013 at 2:45 am

Saw your story. The end is sweet but I felt the start was somewhat rushed. Maybe this was just me, but I didn't fully understand the characters. It's still a nice piece though and I'd surely read any other pieces you might've done.
Also, could you please check out my piece "Dear Mom"?

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Dec. 28, 2013 at 7:50 pm

I checked out your article and left a comment! Please check out my poem TeenInk.com/poetry/song_lyrics/article/599319/Mended/

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JossyRose replied...
Dec. 31, 2013 at 10:32 pm

The overall concept was really sweet and the writing in general was good. However, I did find a few typos, grammatical errors, and in the future, you may want to avoud text talk in stories (i.e. "R u") but aside from that it was really good and I enjoyed reading it. I would greatly appreciate it if you would read any of my stories or poems and give me feedback on it and I hope I did not offend you in any way.

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Carly_ElizabethThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 4 at 5:22 pm

I read your story. Would you mind checking out my story "Molly Marrionette"? 

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