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guardianofthestars posted this thread...
Jul. 26, 2013 at 3:35 pm

I wrote a short story on this website called  
SAVING HUMANITY 
I am thinking about making it into a novel and really need people's thoughts on this.  If you read and comment and tell me I will return the favor. 
I will read 
1 chapter of a novel. 
OR 
2 poems 
OR 
1 short story  
in return.  Thanks for your time!! :)

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None0 replied...
Jul. 27, 2013 at 1:54 pm

I've already read it, but if you want, I can give you more specific feedback and/or novel-specific advice.
 
If you could read a chapter from Death Pact, or Darkest Shadow (if you're only reading 1 chapter, I recommend skipping the prologue since it's just suspense building for later), I'd appreciate it.

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guardianofthestars replied...
Jul. 27, 2013 at 5:28 pm

Sure thing, None0. :) Thanks. 

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BlackbeltJames replied...
Jul. 29, 2013 at 11:57 am

Hey, I commented and rated your story; I'd appreciate if you did the same for either "Belly Of The Beast". And if you feel like taking a look at anything else, feel free :)

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guardianofthestars replied...
Jul. 29, 2013 at 1:29 pm

Thanks, BlackbeltJames.  I will get on that right this second. :)

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fountainpenThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 30, 2013 at 9:35 pm

If you have time, I was wondering if you can read my short story "The Witch and Me". Thanks! :)

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guardianofthestars replied...
Aug. 1, 2013 at 10:49 am

Sure thing. :)

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Claudia.VII replied...
Aug. 2, 2013 at 1:32 pm

If it's possible, the prologue of, "My Loving Overlord"? Thank you!

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guardianofthestars replied...
Aug. 2, 2013 at 10:14 pm

Sure thing!

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SarahHarmon replied...
Aug. 3, 2013 at 11:18 am

Hey could you read my short story, "Noticing Grace"? Would really appreciate feedback! Thanks :)

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guardianofthestars replied...
Aug. 3, 2013 at 5:41 pm

I'd be glad to. :)

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Shailee M. replied...
Aug. 5, 2013 at 11:44 am

Hey! I commented on your story! I thought it was brilliantly written! (: 
Could you please give me feedback on my short story Unchained Love? Feel free to take a look at any of my other stories as well. Thanks so much! :)

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guardianofthestars replied...
Aug. 5, 2013 at 6:42 pm

Sure!!   

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Midnight5765This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 31, 2013 at 11:06 pm

Haya. Could read and comment my two works "AskAllie" Magazine Placement and Volunteerng @ My Local Library. Also if u can check out my newest work "Rain Stop Studderin'"

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guardianofthestars replied...
Aug. 31, 2013 at 11:10 pm

It didn't post Midnight. :(
 

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KeepLiving replied...
Sept. 1, 2013 at 6:00 am

I checked out your story, it was really good. Could you check out mine? It's titled Plummet. I think I'm going to check out some more of your work. You are a really talented writer.

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guardianofthestars replied...
Sept. 1, 2013 at 3:10 pm

Sure thing and thank you so much! Feel free to look at as much as you like. ;)

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LaChouette replied...
Sept. 2, 2013 at 11:46 am

Hello! I'm wondering if you could read a chapter of my novel 'Love has no Boundaries.' I'll check out your story too. Thanks!

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guardianofthestars replied...
Sept. 2, 2013 at 12:10 pm

Yeah I'll check it out.  Please just return the favor. :)

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TanazMasaba replied...
Sept. 5, 2013 at 2:36 am

Okay as long as you do the same for me :D

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