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Carly_ElizabethThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. posted this thread...
Jul. 25, 2013 at 1:30 pm

I'll give away free constructed feedback to short fictions and poems. I will make sure that the feed back is thought out and honest. 

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guardianofthestarsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 26, 2013 at 3:23 pm

Could you please check out my short story Saving Humanity?

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Carly_ElizabethThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 26, 2013 at 6:42 pm

I believe that I have already read it and commented on it. 

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BlackbeltJamesThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 29, 2013 at 12:04 pm

Hey, I'd really appreciate some comments and rates on my work, especially "Belly Of The Beast", but if you have time and don't mind would you be able to do the same for my poem "The Departing Oak", Thanks :)

If there are any other pieces that you like the look of feel free to read them as well :)

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Superhero_Fan replied...
Jul. 29, 2013 at 2:21 pm

Hey, Carly! Could you please check out my poem 'Criticism'? Thanks! I'll look at some of your stuff too.

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fountainpen replied...
Jul. 30, 2013 at 9:15 pm

If you don't mind and have time to spare, I was wondering if you could check out my story "The Witch and Me". Thanks!

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chloejaneThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 31, 2013 at 6:47 am

Hey, if you could give me feed back on my new story 'Splinter' that would be great. It isn't finished, I want to make it a book, but I am desperate for advice and what I can improve on. Usually when I post a story it is voted in top ranks, usually 1-3, 'Splinter' was voted two but I don't beleive it is that great.

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Jul. 31, 2013 at 10:44 am

Could you give me feedback on my newest short story And Eye for a Tooth?  Yes, I really spelled it And Eye for a Tooth by accident. But it can be interpreted like I did it for effect.... maybe. ;) Thanks! If there's anything you'd like rates and comments on in return, I'd be happy to give feedback.

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vegangirl0725This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 31, 2013 at 11:17 am

Can you please read my poem "The Rain"

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WriteOrWrong replied...
Jul. 31, 2013 at 4:03 pm

Hi! It would be great if you give me some feedback on my short story, 'The Imperfect Moment.' If you need any feedback, let me know!

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Carly_ElizabethThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 31, 2013 at 6:22 pm

I read all you guys asked me and commented what I thought. And you don't have to but I wouldn't mind if you checked out my new short story, Sore Loser haha. 

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Shailee M. replied...
Aug. 2, 2013 at 11:27 am

Hi! I'd really appreciate it if you could comment and rate my short story Unchained Love. If you have time, could you also comment on my other short story Victory? Thanks so much! I'll look over your work too! :)

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SarahHarmonThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 3, 2013 at 11:33 am

Hi! Could you please give me feedback on my short story "Noticing Grace"? Thanks Darling :)

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Claudia.VII replied...
Aug. 3, 2013 at 12:37 pm

Ok, could you read the prologue of, "My Loving Overlord"? Thank you in advance!

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Carly_ElizabethThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 3, 2013 at 1:10 pm

Claudia.VII I can't find it right now. It's probably not submitted yet. Is there anything else you want me to read??

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None0 replied...
Aug. 3, 2013 at 6:28 pm

I've lost track of who's read things I've written.
 
Anyways, if you could read my story Kiling Things (don't mind the title, it's just a character introduction), I'd appreciate it.

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Quartermaster replied...
Aug. 3, 2013 at 9:34 pm

Hey could you read and comment on "Requim for Youth"? Please don't be afraid to say you didn't like it as long as you give a reason. That way I can improve.

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Claudia.VII replied...
Aug. 4, 2013 at 9:17 pm

Sorry, I mixed up publishing issues. Could you try, "The Letter Opener Experiment", instead?

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