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Diana101 posted this thread...
Jun. 15, 2013 at 6:28 pm

Hey so I've got two brand new short stories on here & I was wondering if you guys could pick one to read & post some feedback . Also , if you want some feedback , I'd be more than happy to give you some too :)

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None0 replied...
Jun. 15, 2013 at 9:35 pm

I'm assuming the first piece on your profile is one of the new ones? (read and commented)
 
If you want to read my work, my standard is 1 chapter from any novel on my profile. Don't read the whole thing unless you have a lot of time (especially not City of the Doomed).
 
I have some short stories, but they're all just excerpts from my novels anyways, and they're not as updated as my novels. Feel free to read them if you want.

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DarfieldDudette replied...
Jun. 16, 2013 at 12:17 am

Read and commented on Dangerous Truth. :)
I only have one peice up, it's a short film script that I wrote. It's kind of long but I'd LOVE some feedback on it. It'll be on my wall or profile or however this site works (I'm new) :P

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Laugh-it-OutThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 17, 2013 at 7:36 pm

Hey I will read your stories right now. Could you take a look at my pieces "Victim of a gun" and "A Tragic Story" please? Thanks and have a nice day!

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Hanban12This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 19, 2013 at 1:10 pm

Yes please! I will read one of your short stories right now. Could you read either The Spirit of Dawn, Monster in my Eyes or Shattered? It depends what ur interested in. Thanks sooo much! :)

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guardianofthestarsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 20, 2013 at 4:24 pm

I'll read one! :) Please read my short story Saving Humanity  in return.

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PurpleBrass3rd replied...
Jun. 20, 2013 at 8:09 pm

I will read it and comment, but would you please read "The Breaking Pointe" by me? I really would appreciate the feedback. :)
 

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guardianofthestarsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 23, 2013 at 3:58 pm

Um...Diana101? You haven't read my story :(

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SrikarBaireddy replied...
Jul. 24, 2013 at 9:07 am

@guardianofthestars "That…we are alive but…humanity is dying. It is…eroding away because people are only communicating with keyboards and screens. That they saved the people but not the persons."
Definitely one of my favourite lines in any story. I love how you painted a stark image of how the future might be.

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Superhero_Fan replied...
Jul. 29, 2013 at 6:15 pm

Hey Diana! I just read/rated/commented your short-story 'The Dangerous Truth'. Will you please read my poem 'Criticism'? Thanks!

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