Hey so I've got two brand new short stories on here & I was wondering if you guys could pick one to read & post some feedback . Also , if you want some feedback , I'd be more than happy to give you some too :)
I'm assuming the first piece on your profile is one of the new ones? (read and commented)
If you want to read my work, my standard is 1 chapter from any novel on my profile. Don't read the whole thing unless you have a lot of time (especially not City of the Doomed).
I have some short stories, but they're all just excerpts from my novels anyways, and they're not as updated as my novels. Feel free to read them if you want.
Read and commented on Dangerous Truth. :)
I only have one peice up, it's a short film script that I wrote. It's kind of long but I'd LOVE some feedback on it. It'll be on my wall or profile or however this site works (I'm new) :P
Hey I will read your stories right now. Could you take a look at my pieces "Victim of a gun" and "A Tragic Story" please? Thanks and have a nice day!
Yes please! I will read one of your short stories right now. Could you read either The Spirit of Dawn, Monster in my Eyes or Shattered? It depends what ur interested in. Thanks sooo much! :)
I'll read one! :) Please read my short story Saving Humanity in return.
I will read it and comment, but would you please read "The Breaking Pointe" by me? I really would appreciate the feedback. :)
Um...Diana101? You haven't read my story :(
@guardianofthestars "That…we are alive but…humanity is dying. It is…eroding away because people are only communicating with keyboards and screens. That they saved the people but not the persons."
Definitely one of my favourite lines in any story. I love how you painted a stark image of how the future might be.
Hey Diana! I just read/rated/commented your short-story 'The Dangerous Truth'. Will you please read my poem 'Criticism'? Thanks!