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E.J.MathewsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. posted this thread...
Jun. 7, 2013 at 10:32 am

Anyone who reads, rates and comments on my story DOCUMENT1, I will do the same for two of your articles, or three poems. Note, that it may take me a while to return the favor because I hav started a job at my local newspaper, and will have to wait until weekends to read your work. Because of this, I promise that all of my feedback will be structured and helpful. Thanks!

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BlackbeltJamesThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 9, 2013 at 7:42 am

Hey, I just commented on your story (very good). I'd really appreciate it if you took a look at "A Demons  Contract"; I posted it as a book, but it is only four chapters and is no longer than a short/long story.

If you want to or would rather read anything else I have posted, please, feel free. Thanks :)

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E.J.MathewsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 10, 2013 at 12:24 pm

Thanks, BlackbeltJames, I will get to returning the favor as soon as I can!

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E.J.MathewsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 23, 2013 at 9:12 pm

I'm soo sorry that it's taken me like half the summer to read your work. I'm going to get on it right now!!

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Carly_ElizabethThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 24, 2013 at 12:53 pm

I read and commented on your story and I loved it. I would prefer you read my vingettes, or personal experiences, or read my story Moving on a Still Train. Thank you. 

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guardianofthestarsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 24, 2013 at 8:22 pm

I will. Please read Pencil Feathers and How Much I Do Love Thee in return. Thanks!

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kamkit replied...
Jul. 24, 2013 at 9:34 pm

Hi, could you read any of my three articles that I have up? They vary in size, so whichever are most convenient. :)

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Superhero_FanThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 29, 2013 at 6:36 pm

I just read/rated/commented your story. Good job by the way! If you get the chance, could you read my poem 'Criticism'? Thanks E.J.!

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E.J.MathewsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 30, 2013 at 1:54 pm

I'm off to take a look at all of your works right now! I really apprieciate all of your feedback.

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Shailee M. This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 22, 2013 at 12:27 pm

I'll look over Document 1 and I'll comment and rate as well. (:
I'd really appreciate if you could look over my short story My Inner Demon and Unchained Love.
Thanks so much!

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LaChouetteThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 25, 2013 at 3:07 pm

Hello! I rated and commented on your short story DOCUMENT 1. Very nice story! I'd appreciate it if you read my short story 'Consistency' and poem 'Inner Battle.' Thanks!

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