Hey, I'd really appreciate it if you'd read my book "A Demons Contract"; I posted it as a book/novel, but it is really short and it only has four chapters.
If you want to look at anything else that I have posted, feel free. Thanks :)
Hey, can you comment on my short story "Pontifex Maximus?" Greatly appreciate it!
BlackbeltJames - The progression definitely felt more like short stories than a novel.
TheRealMVDarko - Ironically, the progression of your story felt more like a novel.
Not really bored right now, but still willing to review more works.
^ Check that, I'm bored again.
Wow... what's with all of the begging threads lately? Is everyone so desperate for feedback that they have to make a "GIVE ME FEEDBACK!!!!" thread and not look 3 threads under them to this one?
Anyways, even with you guys being hilarious, I'm still bored.
Hi! Would you please read some of my work? I don't have a specific suggestion, but they are all short stories. So you can pick whichever one you want. Please and thank you(:
Yeah, not much else to say.
Why aren't you doing poems?!? I've got a really good one! (I think.) Ironically, it's titled 'criticism'. Oh, well. I hope you've overcome your boredom!
One of these days, I'm going to complete a novel.
Poems don't generally have a good structural design I can use as a reference. They're also mostly emotional, and I'm no good with emotional stuff.
Write a novel! You can do it!
I'm actually in the middle of about three right now, and I've wanted to delete almost all of them at one point or another, because they got boring. That, or I made things too easy for my main character and he or she ended up developing badly. But don't worry! I haven't actually deleted any of them. I'll stop going on and on about this now. Thanks!
Hey, if your still bored I'd really appreciate some feedback on my short stories. Pick from "Belly Of The Beast", "Killer Attitude" or "Heavy Blinker"; feel free to do as many as you like, but they are in my prefered order if you can't decide.
Read "Belly of the Beast". Wasn't feeling too good at the time, so I focused more on the writing itself and less on the plot. I hope you don't mind.
Now I shall officially declare this thread CLOSED.
Yes, I see you there, random teenink forum lurker. Don't post anymore on this thread (unless you're one of the 3-4 who know me personally and want to chat for whatever reason).
None, if this is because you're annoyed at me for all my poetry comments, I will gladly remove them. If it's just because you're tired of reviewing stuff, I won't bother. But I can delete them pretty fast if you need me to. Thanks! :)
Thanks for the offer. Could you comment on "Requim for Youth"?
Nah, I'm just getting to a really busy stage of summer (writing college essays is not fun), so I won't have much time for reviewing.
Quartermaster - Read my last comment.
Okay, thanks! I don't want to tick anyone off, or anything.
Hello. So, if it's possible, I'd like an in-depth review on my fanfic, "The Letter Opener Experiment". I realize that since it's fanfiction, obviously, it'll be lacking an original plot, but I'm really scared of posting any original work on here because people have told me that it's the worst idea you can have if you're looking to be published (hopefully) in the near future. So, if you could give an in-depth analysis of my writing quality..? It's one of my older stories, so I apologize for any quirkiness or choppy sentence structure.
Thank you again, and good luck on your college essays!
I'm pretty sure publishers won't mind if you just delete your work before you officially sign the publishing contract (physically or metaphysically). Works on this site don't have too many views anyway, so it should be fine.
I am really conflicted right now. If people could just stop asking me for feedback, I could leave in peace. But then again, I somewhat enjoy reviewing work for people actually interested in writing... ugh, so many hard decisions.
I'll make an exception, since you actually bothered to read (to a degree) my comments, but seriously people, STOP IT.
I offically declare this thread CLOSED again.
Hear that, everyone? CLOSED CLOSED CLOSED CLOSED CLOSED CLOSED CLOSED CLOSED.
STOP POSTING HERE.
Okay, I'm done now. (no complaining about fairness)