I wrote a Halloween piece a while ago for my English class (Sixteen Pieces of a Broken Mind). I would like to exponentially increase in my writing technique/style, but I would like feedback in order to do so. Any suggestions on what I should improve? I'm more than happy to return the favor!
I read your piece and left a comment, although I'm not sure I'm qualified to judge emotional pieces. Anyways, take my feedback with a grain of salt, since I'm still not a very proficient writer myself.
If you want to read my works, feel free to look at my profile (click my name), but keep in mind that all of them are relatively long.
I keep my promises :) I will read one of your books, although it might take me a while. Thank you for your comment!
I posted on your story, but I think that you've posted on some of my stuff already.
Thank you so much! I'll be sure to read some more of your work.
Could you please read "The Girl who was Also an Atomic Bomb?" I'll read whatever of yours.
Haha, I actually didn't read this comment before I read it. :D It was amazing, great job! I would have never come up with the idea in a million years (cliche, I know).
Lol, still thank you!
No problem, it's always a joy reading others' works! :D Have a great day!
I''l read your story if you can do the same for mine "Flower Girl(revised)".Thanks in advance.(:
Sure! Let me go take a look. :D Thank you!