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Hanban12This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. posted this thread...
Apr. 12, 2013 at 9:44 am

Hi guys! :) I would love to read/rate some of your works. I love giving feedback on anything, especially in fiction. So, if anyone would like comments or critiques, just post a link or tell me what you would like to be critiqued. (I wouldnt mind if you would return the favor ;D )

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Artgirl1999 replied...
Apr. 12, 2013 at 10:30 am

Sure! You can choose: Next Time, Pentagon, or The Talking Chair.

Next Time is a historical fiction piece about the storming of the Bastille and an old lady.



Pentagon is about a love pentagon, or more specifically two couples and a fifth wheel.



The Talking Chair is a short vignette about a (fake) chair. It got Editor's Choice.



So...pick one, or do all three! Oh yeah, and I'll check out your stuff too.

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Candice J. replied...
Apr. 12, 2013 at 8:26 pm

I'd love some feedback! I know fantasy isnt everyones cup of tea, but I hope you'll take the time to read some of it. Its called Fields and Land. :)
TeenInk.com/novels/sci_fi_fantasy/book/113434/Fields-and-Land/

I'll definitely check out your stuff as well :)

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Artgirl1999 replied...
Apr. 13, 2013 at 12:36 pm

I read/commented on one of your pieces.

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Shadowcreeper replied...
Apr. 13, 2013 at 2:16 pm

If you could read my piece titled 'We: The Last', That would be great. I'll return the favor.

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ZaZaGoober replied...
Apr. 13, 2013 at 4:15 pm

Cool, if you could read my story Crimson Snow and give your opinion that would be great and I'd be happy to read any of your stuff :)

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KenyaLove41 replied...
Apr. 13, 2013 at 6:07 pm

If you could review "Flower Girl (revised)" I would be eternally grateful. I will attempt to return the favor.(: 

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Hanban12This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 13, 2013 at 6:48 pm

hey guys! sure, as soon as i get the chance ill read/comment on ur stuff ;)

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Hanban12This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 13, 2013 at 9:11 pm

Thanks so much! I commented on urs too :)

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Hanban12This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 13, 2013 at 9:11 pm

Sure! :) no problem

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LexusMarieThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 13, 2013 at 10:45 pm

Hi, can you please read my story called 'Chelsea.' Thanks a ton Hannah!

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Hanban12This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 14, 2013 at 7:49 pm

Sure, no problemo

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E.J.Mathews replied...
Apr. 17, 2013 at 11:17 am

If you could read, rate, and comment on my story The Eternal Darkness of Emily Gloom, that would be great! I promise it isn't very long.

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Cutey-Beauty replied...
Apr. 18, 2013 at 10:00 am

Hey :) if you could be so kind as to read anything that I have written (couple of poetry pieces, two short stories, an opinion piece) and comment I would appreciate it so much! Thank you in advance.

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Hanban12This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 18, 2013 at 4:50 pm

Awesome! will do :)

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livebeautifulx3 replied...
Apr. 18, 2013 at 4:58 pm

I read a few of your pieces. Your rhyming skill is awesome in poetry, and your plot is great. Please read The Arch of Love? Thank you!

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Hanban12This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 18, 2013 at 6:40 pm

I absolutley loved ur story! Ur very talented!

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None0 replied...
Apr. 18, 2013 at 8:49 pm

Could you take a look at my novel? It's the one with the city (it should really be under sci-fi/fantasy, not mystery).
 
I read some of your works, and they are very thoroughly descriptive, while not taking away from clarity of the plot. Very impressive (wish I could write like that consistently).

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Hanban12This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 21, 2013 at 5:57 pm

I loved ur story so much! (i posted a comment on it as well) Its amazing!!

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None0 replied...
Apr. 21, 2013 at 9:27 pm

Sorry, but there might have been a mix-up. I was refering to my city book, as in City of the Doomed, and I was saying that it should really have to tag sci-fi/fantasy instead of the tag it already has, which is myster/thriller.
 
The other book, RWA Anthology (temp), wasn't really ready yet for reading (it still needs a lot of polishing), but I'm glad you liked it regardless.

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