Hi guys! :) I would love to read/rate some of your works. I love giving feedback on anything, especially in fiction. So, if anyone would like comments or critiques, just post a link or tell me what you would like to be critiqued. (I wouldnt mind if you would return the favor ;D )
Sure! You can choose: Next Time, Pentagon, or The Talking Chair.
Next Time is a historical fiction piece about the storming of the Bastille and an old lady.
Pentagon is about a love pentagon, or more specifically two couples and a fifth wheel.
The Talking Chair is a short vignette about a (fake) chair. It got Editor's Choice.
So...pick one, or do all three! Oh yeah, and I'll check out your stuff too.
I'd love some feedback! I know fantasy isnt everyones cup of tea, but I hope you'll take the time to read some of it. Its called Fields and Land. :)
I'll definitely check out your stuff as well :)
I read/commented on one of your pieces.
If you could read my piece titled 'We: The Last', That would be great. I'll return the favor.
Cool, if you could read my story Crimson Snow and give your opinion that would be great and I'd be happy to read any of your stuff :)
If you could review "Flower Girl (revised)" I would be eternally grateful. I will attempt to return the favor.(:
hey guys! sure, as soon as i get the chance ill read/comment on ur stuff ;)
Thanks so much! I commented on urs too :)
Sure! :) no problem
Hi, can you please read my story called 'Chelsea.' Thanks a ton Hannah!
Sure, no problemo
If you could read, rate, and comment on my story The Eternal Darkness of Emily Gloom, that would be great! I promise it isn't very long.
Hey :) if you could be so kind as to read anything that I have written (couple of poetry pieces, two short stories, an opinion piece) and comment I would appreciate it so much! Thank you in advance.
Awesome! will do :)
I read a few of your pieces. Your rhyming skill is awesome in poetry, and your plot is great. Please read The Arch of Love? Thank you!
I absolutley loved ur story! Ur very talented!
Could you take a look at my novel? It's the one with the city (it should really be under sci-fi/fantasy, not mystery).
I read some of your works, and they are very thoroughly descriptive, while not taking away from clarity of the plot. Very impressive (wish I could write like that consistently).
I loved ur story so much! (i posted a comment on it as well) Its amazing!!
Sorry, but there might have been a mix-up. I was refering to my city book, as in City of the Doomed, and I was saying that it should really have to tag sci-fi/fantasy instead of the tag it already has, which is myster/thriller.
The other book, RWA Anthology (temp), wasn't really ready yet for reading (it still needs a lot of polishing), but I'm glad you liked it regardless.