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Always-Abby posted this thread...
Apr. 1, 2013 at 7:10 pm

So, on the NaNoWriMo (National Novel Writing Month) forums, there's often many threads of critique/feedback trains of summaries and short snippets of people's stories. From what I see here, there are a number of topics of people only giving one person (the original poster) a look-through.

So, this is where everyone can get a chance of being looked at! Basically, it's just commenting/critiquing on the works of the user above you! You can either specify which work you'd like to have looked at, or just let the reviewer decide c:

The next person can choose any of the works that I've submitted.

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Laugh-it-OutThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 1, 2013 at 8:15 pm

Could you take a look at my piece cancer or anger thnx and if u can find it, I had it on anon, I would like if u could read my piece hungry eyes just search and it might come up. Thankx

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readaholicThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 2, 2013 at 2:20 pm

I read the first two, and I'm pretty sure I got the right "hungry eyes"
Heartless Love for me, please :)

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Always-Abby replied...
Apr. 2, 2013 at 7:35 pm

I loved the characterization! Although either the pacing or the wording made it a little difficult to follow in some spots, it was made up for by the characters and their interaction with each other. Knat seems particularly strong, as in he's not bland despite the shortness of the piece. 
Any of my works can be chosen c:

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readaholicThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 3, 2013 at 8:08 pm

Really good :) (obviously, wrote more on the actual piece)
mmm....The Eyes on my Soul

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holly1999This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 4, 2013 at 7:39 am

Wow, really good :)
"Enough is Enough" please :)

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readaholicThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 5, 2013 at 2:19 pm

There's a lot of pieces on bullying (especially because of the book) but yours stood out!
....Perfectionism?  Yeah, that's good (I'd rather have a different story, but it's not up yet :P)

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