Hey guys. So Teen Ink just posted a story of mine and I was hoping you could read it and maybe give me some feedback. Here's a sample:
Alright, so everybody’s all angry at me, like I’m the bad guy. They just keep pointing their fingers, saying I’m the one who killed Dean Adams and Easter Boomings. I don’t know why they feel the need to tell me what I already know is true. That’s right, you caught me- the murderer.
I really don’t get why I just got arrested for this. You see, no one understands my reasoning behind the whole thing.
Let’s start with Easter Boomings…my mother. Yes, I remember it like it was yesterday........
****Go on my page a look for the story titled "The Time Bomb" to read more.
If you read my story, I'll read yours :)
I read the introduction which was pretty good. I'll be sure to check ouit the rest but if you could read and comment on my story "Flower Girl (revised)" that woud be wonderful.