Teen Ink

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Hey guys. So Teen Ink just posted a story of mine and I was hoping you could read it and maybe give me some feedback. Here's a sample:
 
Alright, so everybody’s all angry at me, like I’m the bad guy. They just keep pointing their fingers, saying I’m the one who killed Dean Adams and Easter Boomings. I don’t know why they feel the need to tell me what I already know is true. That’s right, you caught me- the murderer.



I really don’t get why I just got arrested for this. You see, no one understands my reasoning behind the whole thing.



Let’s start with Easter Boomings…my mother. Yes, I remember it like it was yesterday........
****Go on my page a look for the story titled "The Time Bomb" to read more.