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Hi, everyone! My new novel, Lucavon, just got published and I'm looking for feedback on it. It would be really helpful if you could tell me what you thought of the dialogue (that's something I struggle with) the characters, and the plot, (it's not finished yet- I've only posted the first chapter so far) I will gladly review one of your pieces (a novel, or a short story, and poems are fine too) It would be helpful for me if you told me specific things you want feedback on, but it's okay if you don't. All I ask is that you go first, and after you have left a comment, reply here and tell me what you want read. I might be kind of busy with school but I promise I will get to you. Thanks !
Commented. Would you please read the start of my story, it's on forum. Only a couple of paragraphs so far.
Read and commented! Could you check out a chapter or two of "The Story of Ivy Hayes"?
Thank you! Your comment helped me out a lot! I'll read your piece soon:)
I'll swap! Please read "I Am Tomorrow" on my page. Thanks!!
Commented! Could you please read the start of my short story? It's on the forum.
Finished with everybody! I read some really great pieces. Keep em coming:)
Could you repsond to Mother Nature on my page? I loved Lucavon! Something i forgot to say in my review- where did you come up with those names?!
Sure, I'll take a look at it:) As for the names, they just kind of popped into my head xD I don't even remember thinking about my main character's name, it's just always been his name for as long as I can remember. I think I had already figured out what the characters' personalities were so it wasn't that hard for me to come up with a name that fit them. I also use baby naming websites; they are super helpful if you are having trouble coming up with a good name. Anyway thanks for the comment. I'm glad you liked it! I'll go read yours now.
anybody else want reviews?=)
Anybody else want to swap?
hey, I'm still willing to do this if anybody else wants me to read their stuff:) I love reading people's writing and helping them out!
You can do any of my fiction pieces (there are three). I'll check out your story in a second.
I'm on it! thanks for your comment:)