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AmaranthiniumThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. posted this thread...
Mar. 3, 2013 at 5:43 pm

I'd love to critique some short stories and such. I don't ask for anything in return (though of course I wouldn't complain if you wanted to go check out some of my stuff ;D ). It may sometimes take me a while to get back to you, but I'll do my best! 

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MidnightFire replied...
Mar. 3, 2013 at 9:45 pm

Awesome! I'd ask for some help with my 'Drizzle' series but it's kind of long so plz, anything you like. :) Thank you!!

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TheRealMVDarko replied...
Mar. 4, 2013 at 11:18 am

Hi, Luckily i'm delighted to tell you that i also view the pieces of people who've commented on mine. (And comment also) Unluckily, I, as of now, have ZERO comments. Would you please do the honors of being the good samaritan? It's called Pontifex Maximus, by TheRealMVDarko

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Mar. 4, 2013 at 11:53 am

That would be wonderful! If you're in for a novel (not that long; only three chapters I think), the could you please read my unfinished detective story The Ace of Spades? If you don't want to read a novel, could you check out my new piece We the Imagined? Thank you, and is there anything you would like critiques on? I'm happy to read some of your work.

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KenyaLove41This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Mar. 5, 2013 at 7:34 pm

I would really appericate it if you could check my story. "Flower Girl (revised)" Thanks in advance(:

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AmaranthiniumThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Mar. 31, 2013 at 7:53 pm

I have done all but KenyaLove41's critiques; Kenya, I promise I'll get to you soon! :)
And Athena, if you could look at my poem "The Industrial Heart" that'd be awesome :)
 

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holly1999This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 1, 2013 at 5:02 am

Could you read my stories "Second Chance" and "Enchant" please? I'd love to read some of your work, is there anything you would like critiques on? :)

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Laugh-it-OutThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 1, 2013 at 5:28 pm

Could you also take a look at my piece A species all her own or ill show you the way. Yu take ur pick, I'll check out some of ur stuf to thanks

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readaholicThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 5, 2013 at 6:57 pm

Could you please look at some of my work?  I'll look at yours :)

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Laugh-it-OutThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 6, 2013 at 12:04 am

Could u look at my stuff? Don't care what. Anything and verything

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AmaranthiniumThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 27, 2013 at 11:48 am

I think I finally got everyone! Sorry that took so long, you guys; exams and vacation really got in the way. Also, thanks for looking at my work :)

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BlackbeltJamesThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 30, 2013 at 5:47 pm

Hey, I'd really appreciate it if you took a look at my short story "Belly Of The Beast", but if you have time feel free to look at "Killer Attitude" as well, or anything else. Thanks :D

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guardianofthestarsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 30, 2013 at 8:42 pm

WOuld you look at my short story Saving Humanity?

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Superhero_FanThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 8, 2013 at 3:52 pm

Hey Amaranthinium! If you have the time, could you read my poem 'Criticism'? If you've got too much to do, or not enough time, I totally understand and won't be disappointed! Thanks.

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Alizz replied...
Jul. 9, 2013 at 7:11 am

Hey, could you check out my story called the Prisoner? It is my first story on here, and I am only thirteen, so please go kind of easy on me. I will make sure to return the favor!

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AmaranthiniumThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 11, 2013 at 11:25 am

I think I got everyone! :)

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SwanSong replied...
Aug. 19, 2013 at 9:49 pm

I'd really appreciate it if you could check out my story "The Truth About Expectations". I'll definintely check out your work when I get the chance!

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LaChouetteThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 19, 2013 at 10:43 pm

Hello! I'd like it if you read a short story of mine. It's called Consistency. If you have any specific requests for a piece you would like me to read, just let me know. Thanks!

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E.J.MathewsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 20, 2013 at 1:05 pm

Awesome! If you could read and comment on my short story DOCUMENT1 that would be great. Thanks!

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AmaranthiniumThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 27, 2013 at 6:45 pm

I got all of you! All of your critiques are like really long and nitpicky though - I hope they actually help you and don't make you, like, cry or something. I really loved your stories - they were amazing! :D Also, if y'all are going to check out my stuff, could you look at either "If Death Were a Gentleman" or "To Our Leader"? :)

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