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Ella_Rose posted this thread...
Feb. 19, 2013 at 5:34 pm

I don't mean one between the main character and whoever. No I mean one between just two of the characters. Two that are always at eachothers throats but will still fight for eachother.
For mine, its Chris and Shane. They would consider themselves friends but their jealousy over Ella makes everything between them a war.

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Ella_Rose replied...
Mar. 9, 2013 at 6:15 pm

***bump***

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Ella_Rose replied...
Mar. 18, 2013 at 4:19 pm

**Chris**
 
"Can't we just kill them?" Nate questions after helping Pat and Will carry Ell and Shane downstairs and chain him to the wall.
"No!" I say quickly as Will pulls out a gun.
"Not for them, hick," then he shoots me. In the stomach. Immediatly I scream not I usually do. This doesnt sound like me, heck it doesnt sound human.
"Chris!" Aaron yells.
"Can it or you know who is next!" Pat snaps, shuting him up."Nate she cannot die. He," meaning Shane I guess, "Is the one you want to suffer, correct?"
"Yes," Will says quickly
"Well, her pain will kill him quicker then a gun to his head." and that may actually be true. Hoping it won'tbe the last time they're open, I close my eyes.

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Ella_Rose replied...
Mar. 18, 2013 at 4:47 pm

**Aaron**
"Shane," I try for the twentieth time, "Shane!" I yell. I'd get up if I wasn't cuffed to the stair railing. Then I hear one of Ella's bloodcudling screams. They took her away an hour or so ago and her screams just get louder and louder. Thinking about it, it may not be best to wake Shane up.
"Where is she?" he questions, jolting up.
"Will carried her upstairs awhile ago," I say through gritted teeth. "Pat said himself they won't kill her."
"That's my only guarantee?" he says and I can hear they anger.
"You'll have to stick with it. You know she's alive and your alive thanks to Chris to make sure she stays that way."
"What?"
"They shot him man. Point blank. I don't know where he's alive though." I pause "He stopped Nate from killing you." which isn't an entire lie.
"He wouldn't."
"I would," he gurgles from his side of the room. Its to dark to see him but I don't need sight to hear him fighting down his own blood. "I'm sorry man. I've fought it fought you and i'm tired of it. But no matter how endless it was I still feel like your my brother."
"Shut up Chris. Your not dying." is he really fighting back tears? They've fought so long so hard and this is where they end it. One dying.
"He shot me in the stomach from less than a foot away. I'm done."
"Not listening to it." Shane snaps.
"Just protect Ell-,"
"Your not going to die Chris!" Shane yells. Obviously they'll fight till their last breath.
"Keep her safe," theres another gurgle and i'm not completley positive that he's alive. Apparently Shane thinks the same and I can hear him crying.
Not that i'm completley shocked. If they could fight that long and still stand to be near eachother they don't hate. They care so much more then they're willing to admit. And I guess we really can't hate eachother having been through what we've gone through. And surving our insane lives for another day

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Ella_Rose replied...
Mar. 18, 2013 at 4:51 pm

These are to excerpts one from Aaron one from Chris. They were kiddnapped by Nate, Will, Pat and others not mentioned. The you know who mentioned in Chris' excerpt is Aaron's girlfriend Audrey. Ella (Ell) is the reason Chris and Shane fight. Anything else needing to be cleared up, ask.

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Ella_Rose replied...
Apr. 6, 2013 at 3:47 pm

Ella's bloodcurdling screams*******

I'm not sure if i'm going to put this in my actual book... Any thoughts?

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