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How well do you know your characters? (CD)

Ella_Rose posted this thread...
Feb. 13, 2013 at 7:14 pm

Okay they're our character's and we claim we know them. Have you thought of every detail though? Tell me what you've thought of about your characters. Anything and everything. Big or small. I'll be able to ask a question you never had to think up an answer for.
I'll do mine tommorrow:)

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Feb. 13, 2013 at 8:04 pm

Look at my comment for the Characters: we rate 'em thread (it's the last comment on the last page).

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Ella_Rose replied...
Feb. 14, 2013 at 3:55 pm

I'm trying to do something different. A challenge to see if people could answer every possible question
But i'll look

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Feb. 14, 2013 at 7:15 pm

Ask away! I love being challenged :)

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Ella_Rose replied...
Feb. 14, 2013 at 9:08 pm

Ella Rose
 straight, black hair
vibrant emerald green eyes.
She's considered small and skinny.
Her and her mom,April live alone, her dad having died a few years back. She has no siblings or any other relatives
Ella is quiet but very opinionated. She makes rash decisions that she often later sees were wrong.
Her one big mistake in particular, was her big misjudgment of Shane. One of the few that caused nothing bad to happen

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Ella_Rose replied...
Feb. 14, 2013 at 9:12 pm

Shane Mason,
Shaggy black hair
Piercing green eyes. His facial features are chisled.
He's tall and extremely well built.
 Very musical and athletic and that's all he lets a lot of people see.
He has an abusive father, his mom died he lives with his aunt Christie (Aarons mom)Liam and Ashley are his two older siblings
At first Aaron is the only one who knows his little secret. The secret of what those scars on Shane's back really are. What they mean. Eventually Ella does finds out. Not really at his willingness to tell her but, she finds out

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AislinnBluejay replied...
Feb. 15, 2013 at 9:14 pm

Breezy Sauleovitch,
Curly, wavy dark hair
Gooseberry-green eyes, the kind that are at their prime when immersed in their characteristic deep, soul-resurrecting happiness. She has a classically attractive face and figure but mocks heself constantly, especially her nose, which she says is "so big the doctor saw me in my mother's stomach and asked if she'd swallowed a velociraptor." She doesn't have low self esteem or anyhting, shes 'just being....well, Breezy. She writes and does a lot of comedy, also acting and playing guitar.
She is in a band called Little Oak Grove with her friends Ivan, Ash, joey, Harry and Aidan. She is their guitarist, obviously. Together, they have a lot of fun. Breezy's one of those people who can always make heaven out of hell.
Her father is a financial advisor and her mother owns and operates a small cheese shop. She moved to massachusetts last year but is a long-running Long Island native, all generations of both sides of her family having lived there since emigrating from their respective countries. Breezy's father's family is Russian; her mother's family, Italian. She lives in an old pre-Victorian house that her father chizzled the market down for (Nick Sauleovitch is a very skilled negotiator) with her 3 little sisters, 12-year-old Yelena (Laney), and the 10-year-old twins Tatiana and Julia (Julie). In addition to Herman the Retarded, Drag Queen Labradoodle, the Sauleovitches own 6 peacocks named Bono, Harry Styles, Adam levine, Mick Jagger, John Lennon and Pete Wentz.
That, in a nutshell, is Breezy Sauleovitch.

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AislinnBluejay replied...
Feb. 15, 2013 at 9:31 pm

I have a character who I love. His name is Ivan Sullen, he has curly black hair and large hazel eyes as well as, admittedly, a skin problem. He constanlty wears a cobalt-blue beanie and therefore has pimples all over his forehead. He's a little taller than average, with an average body type. He is the vocalist for a garage band called Little Oak Grove with his friends but doesn't know what he wants to do. He is a mama's boy, and although his mother, Brenda, doesn't sugar-coat htings she loves him deeply. She's a successful businesswoman although when Ivan was born she was destitiute, 21 and not knowing who had gotten her pregnant. She never married and seldom dates although a very classy, funny, attractive although slightly tomboyish woman, kinda like Sarah Silverman. She has an active social life and has taught Ivan a lot about what it means to realize what you want to do and then fulfill it. Ivan has no siblings. He's not book-smart but very people-smart.
When he was 8, he was diagnosed with ADHD, which his mom never told him as she knew he would not understand it. He has always felt different though and this is his little.....dilemma.

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AislinnBluejay replied...
Feb. 16, 2013 at 7:22 am

Question about Shane. What kind of stuff is in his refrigerator? What does he want to be wjen he grows up? What bands/artists does he listen to? What does he want to do before he dies? What's his favorite book?

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Ella_Rose replied...
Feb. 16, 2013 at 3:22 pm

Shane is kind of stays with Ella more then anyone. When he isn't with her he's at his aunt christie's house. With Scott and Mike also there (Aaron's six year old twin brothers) there's mainly kid food. Lot of juice boxes and stuff like that. Shane would eat anything anyway.
When he grows up he wants to do something to stop people like his dad. He's not sure what exactly but anything to protect kids from what his dad put him through.
Shane's not much of a reader he can't read that well so no favorite book. He's not much of a planner and doesn't like to think of anything along the lines of him dying so not really any plans like that.
He likes all music except for country.

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carolinestarr replied...
Mar. 29, 2013 at 1:17 am

Well, this will be challenging for me. My characters are always so vague. Haha. Honestly, I almost never name them. Characters are so hard. Haha. Anyways, I'm trying to challenge myself a lot and actually write a real story with PLOT and DIALOGUE and COMPLEX CHARACTERS. WOAH. HOLD UP. INSANE, I KNOW. Anyways, so I'm gonna try my best to do this for one of my characters. Here it goes...
Winnie Rose Marcel. 17 years old. A junior in high school, but the story doesn't really have nything to do with school so that's not exactly relevant. Tall, skiiny/lean. Medium skin. Long, dark brown wavy hair. Green eyes. Slightly crooked smile. A writer (specifically a journalist). Ended up becoming addicted to drugs. She had wanted to do an in-depth piece about drugs, but got addicted in the process. Before her addiction, she had wanted to be a journalist. Now, she doesn't want to write at all. She doesn't see any problem with her doing drugs. Her (ex)boyfriend, Abbott, supported her before the addiction, but now Winnie has changed and Abbott is not happy. Winnie is very in love with Abbott, but abbott does not return the feeling. All Winnie cares about is Abbott and getting her next fix on drugs. Abbott desperately wants to change Winnie and get her back to the way she was before, because that's the girl he loved. Winnie is very sensitive, which causes her a lot of pain. She is an only child, and she doesn't like her parents. She is extremely spoiled. Everyone in the area is very very rich. 

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Ella_Rose replied...
Apr. 6, 2013 at 3:41 pm

For Aislinn, both characters
What are their favorite colors? Do they have anyother talents then those you metioned? 
What are Breezy's parents names?
Does Ivan have any other family?
Also the questions you asked me about Shane
For caroline
You shouldn't let your characters be vauge. They are a huge part of your story and can make or brake your piece
What is Winnie's favorite color? Does she have family? Where does she live? What drugs is she addicted to?

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JettaWintry replied...
Apr. 8, 2013 at 8:07 pm

Faith Greene:
Faith (13) used to live at home with her parents, twin sisters (8 years, Joy and Jade), baby brother (Mikey, 1 year), and adopted brother (Tanner, 14) before she ran away with Tanner. (They had adopted Tanner from his nearby house whenever a housefire struck and his parents were both killed.) Running away with Tanner, her adopted brother whom she doesn't really consider a brother, was her only choice when it came down to everything; her parents were quickly fading out of existence. 
The Greene family was able to adopt him because his family and theirs had been very close friends, and they had the Greene's listed as an emergency contact.
Faith has very long, light blonde hair. She often gets asked if she dyes it, but always replies with a hasty "no." She has emerald green eyes, which she loves. Pale olive skin covers her body.
Faith loves sewing, and her skill helps her and Tanner to escape their quickly sinking home; she makes life-sized dolls to stuff under their sheets so it appears they are sleeping, but they are really running away.
Faith has a very pessimistic view on life, and if it wasn't for Tanner keeping her up and being optimistic, she would be long gone, emotionally and physically.
Ask away! (: I'm sure I'm missing out on a lot of stuff.

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Ella_Rose replied...
Apr. 19, 2013 at 8:29 pm

What happened to her parents? Where does this all take place? Any secret talents?

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IMSteel replied...
Apr. 28, 2013 at 3:07 pm

Marc Bones:
Black, shaggy, slightly graying hair hanging low over stormy sea-blue eyes that glare tempestuously out at anyone and everyone.  He has a heavyset jaw held like a man who is used to shouting and giveing orders, his eyes confirming this characteristic. 
This character has expanded so much, the only way to thuroughly describe him to you, you would have to read my book, The Voyages of the Waved Albatross.  But ask away!  Any question at all!

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TopazParakeet replied...
Apr. 29, 2013 at 5:33 pm

Right, I like these. Her name is Connie Vane, and she is around about fifteen years old. She never really kept track because of the whole raised-on-a-pirate-ship shinding, and it just wasn't all that important to keep track of. She's fairly short, with dark curly hair cut off about chin level and bluish-green eyes. Somewhere there's Irish people in her lineage, but she never kept track of that either. All in all, Connie is an impulsive young girl who will stop at nothing until her plans are resolved, with a temper that will flare up at a moment's notice. She has an inherent love for the sea and is a fair hand at navigation, but she can't read well or write much at all. Her language consists mostly of curse words and "But-". Her most prized possession is a pocket watch given to her by Captain Hanbury when she was eleven-ish. It doesn't work, but it sure as heck looks pretty. She has no family other than her father, Sebastian, who is the Salamander's first mate. Connie never knew her mother. Sebastian is presumed dead after they run into a wreck of kraken, along with the captain. Connie considers the entire crew to be her family, setting aside Alistair who is (in her words) "an obnoxious jerk who couldn't sail his way out of a paper bag". She has a soft spot for sea birds but is epecially terrified of kraken. Her eyesight is fairly good, and so she spends most of her time up in the crow's nest looking out for things. Connie is people-oriented and hates being alone. She has taken a shine to one of the younger crew members by the name of Matthias.

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GSguppies105 replied...
Apr. 30, 2013 at 8:20 am

Scarlett Rose,
red head, with a fiery personality to match. She is quiet , but get on her bad side and she will retaliate. Though she is small, she is agile and can win almost any fight (and believe me with her temper she gets into alot of fist fights). She lives with her parents, Pepper and Tony Rose. She is part of a side-kick affiliation where the FBI sends out kids to do spy jobs in order to maintain important info.
Ask away :)

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TopazParakeet replied...
Apr. 30, 2013 at 10:59 am

So I submitted mine and all, but it hasn't shown up yet. I'm getting a little annoyed (I wrote it like two days ago.)

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Ella_Rose replied...
Apr. 30, 2013 at 2:22 pm

IMSteel: Anything in his past? Family, friends? Is there more to his personality?
GSguppies105: Any secret talents? Old friends? Anything more to her past?
TopazParakeet: That is really weird, sorry I don't know what more to say :\
Feel free to question me on Ella and Shane

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GSguppies105 replied...
May 1, 2013 at 7:15 am

Secret Talents: amazing computer hacker, even though she is like 12
Old Friends: Robby, bestfriends since kinder and Lilac, bestfriends since she fractured her arm when she was four.
Past: nothing tragic, just a regular girl that went to skool and the FBI asked her to join. mostly cuz of her parents used to be former FBI agents

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