how are your stories coming along?
I've got mine done. It's up on my Figment account; I could send a link to the story there, or just paste it here. Either way!
go ahead and send the link ;)
I did'nt get the link, but it says you posted. Can you just type it please or tell me what I need to type in at Figment;)? Thanks!!
I'm so happy I'm almost done with mine, I hope you like it but I'm confused how you want us to get it to you.
Is it ok if I just post it on this page?
Ugh! Okay. It's "The Fence" by Samantha Gerthe at Figment (dot) com. It's probably easiest to search my name, and the story is right at he top of my page!
I just did what WhenItRains did and posted it on my figment account. Mine is "The Fence Between You and I" by Katelynn Gilbert.
I'm Posting one Now.....
What I Hate About Myself ^.^
I hate that sometimes I’m to nice
And that I always have to make rice
Be helpful, and in no way mean
Or even make a very big scene
So I planned on changing that
Which I did so like an acrobat
I hate that sometimes I’m to patient
And feel like taking someones station
I want to yell and scream so bad
That I can just think of thoughts that are mad
And I even hide underneath my smile
Something in my brain thats vile
I hate that sometimes I’m to mean
Because my brother I always cream
I always smack him way to hard
And then his feelings I disregard
But then I get a little teary
For smacking and making him so dreary
But we had already made an agreement
That we must give each other the same treatment
Ok then there it is...
I cannot find them on figment. can you please post them on teennk?
Mine's posted on here. It's just "The Fence." It's not the final version, so I'll see if there's some way I can post a link!
OK well, I got to read some great pieces. Each piece was really wrapped up and interesting. I want to praise the writers who I thought did really well. Continuse to read all of this!!
Bcookie, your story ranked #1 overall. You took a normal fence and turned it into something creative and raw.. such as a fence made of all your lies that you wanted to tear down. And the oldman who lived behing the fence..was your conscience? WOW I was impressed!!!
In second place was... WhenItRains21! Your piece really was strong. I like the connection between your characters and the fence that brought themm together. I also like the way to tied the fence back into it when she got abducted. I think there could've been more depth behing the abduction and her getting killed. I woul'dve like to learn what happened to her. Mabey just a little more depth in that are or a lead on? Anyways it was great too!
OK so you guys are the finalist!! I want you to write one last time on this topic: Seven days of rain at summercamp." Goodluck:)
I'm finished :) I'm going to go ahead and post it here, and I'll let you know when it's approved!
Just curious did you ever get a chance to read mine?
no. I asked you to send the link and you never did. So, I was for sure on one piece and I waited. If you'd like to write on this prompt, then I supposed I could judge it. But now ther is only one winner. Goodluck!
Mine is taking forever to post... is there another way I could share it with you?
Hey can you read my poem: Rheese
and my short story: Target Practice
Just click my name and you will get all of my writing
sorry, this is a closed contest now. I'm with the final two but of course I'll still read your writing!! Feedback for feedback?
I'm sorry it's taking a long time. I read one of your pieces and I was impressed! I'm super busy right now with my regionals power of the pen competition coming up. It's like a contest at a school and you go to 3 rounds and they have awards and it's really cool!! I'm super nervous because this is to go to state.