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Afterhours posted this thread...
Feb. 5, 2013 at 12:30 am

I have a rough version of a short story I want to submit to contests on this site and elsewhere, except I'm afraid my piece lacks depth and voice. Can you guys give me some feedback? Thanks so much!

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CariePierce replied...
Feb. 5, 2013 at 7:38 am

I'll gladly give you feedback if you willl please do the same on my piece Princess of Suburbia!

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CariePierce replied...
Feb. 5, 2013 at 7:40 am

Wait, I just checked your page. Your piece actually hasn't been approved by the editors yet, so it's not currently published. But when it's there, I'll definately check it out.

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thegoldenllama replied...
Feb. 5, 2013 at 7:04 pm

I will check it out! Meanwhile, can you look at my Lab Rat piece? Comment or rate? Thanks!!

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Afterhours replied...
Feb. 5, 2013 at 9:31 pm

Yea I'll check both of yours out right now! 

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KateyKat replied...
Feb. 6, 2013 at 2:01 pm

Sure, would you mind reading and commenting on my new piece Lurking Shadows?

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IMSteelThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 9, 2013 at 10:21 am

Sure, I'll read yours right now.  Please read and comment on the first four chapters of my book, The Voyages of the Waved Albatross.  Thanks!

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IMSteelThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 9, 2013 at 10:25 am

It doesn't seem to have been posted, your story I mean.  I'll read it as soon as I can, word of honor.

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RarelyJadedThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 11, 2013 at 3:49 pm

Hi! I will read your story as soon as I read someone else's:)... Could you read mine called Transgressions? It's like four paragraphs, very short.

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guardianofthestarsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 11, 2013 at 4:47 pm

I'll read your story. Could you please read my short shory "Cupid"?

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MadilynRose123 replied...
Feb. 12, 2013 at 5:28 pm

I read yours and commented feedback; it'd be appreciated if you did the same for me! :) My story is called "The Covenant Killer." Thanks!

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Sketched97This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 13, 2013 at 6:52 pm

Sure, can you look at "The What If Game"? Thanks!

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