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Feedback on your stuff!!!

WhenItRains21 posted this thread...
Feb. 4, 2013 at 4:54 pm

I'll keep it simple: You read some of my stuff, I'll read some of yours. You can pick which one of my pieces to read, and I'll read/comment/rate whichever of your pieces you'd like me to! I'll do two or three or four... However many you want. :)
 

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Sakuya replied...
Feb. 4, 2013 at 8:21 pm

Feel free to read whatever you want. My older stuff isn't as good but that's just my opinion maybe you'll like it XD

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guardianofthestarsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 5, 2013 at 9:24 am

I'll read. Read as much as you want of whatever you want (the more the merrier).

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WhenItRains21 replied...
Feb. 5, 2013 at 9:41 am

Sakuya: I'll read/rate/comment on A First Snow. 
guardianofthestars: I'll do Saving Humanity and A Stands for Angel
Let me know if either one of you would like me to do more!

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IMSteelThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 5, 2013 at 5:42 pm

could you plese read and comment on my story: The Voyages of the Waved Albatross.  I'll go read some of yours right now.

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Sketched97This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 5, 2013 at 7:15 pm

Could you please look at "The 'What If" Game"? Thanks, looking at yours now.

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Sakuya replied...
Feb. 6, 2013 at 8:16 pm

@WhenItRains21 thank you!

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Sakuya replied...
Feb. 6, 2013 at 8:21 pm

@Guardian: I just read/rated your "Leaf Tornados" I really liked it!

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Sakuya replied...
Feb. 6, 2013 at 8:27 pm

@Sketched: I read/rated your "What If" story and your "music of the City" poem both of which I enjoyed

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Sakuya replied...
Feb. 6, 2013 at 8:32 pm

@Steel: Historical fiction has never been my cup of tea so in order not to say anything bad I had my friend who is the definition of a "history nerd" read it and he replies, "Good historical fiction comes from those who do their research. You, my friend, have done your research and added your own unique ideas that create a great story. The style you use is different in a very good way and your imagery, well more so your dialogue, creates a fantastic picture in my mind."

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WhenItRains21 replied...
Feb. 6, 2013 at 11:32 pm

Read/commented/rated everyone's stuff so far. IMSteel, I'm working on reading yours! I'll finish it up tomorrow afternoon.

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RarelyJadedThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 7, 2013 at 11:11 pm

Okay... Can you read any one of my posts EXCEPT for "what hatred does" or something like that... It sucks, not my best work. I will comment on yours!

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readaholicThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Mar. 22, 2013 at 5:07 pm

I've already taken advantage of one of your amazing feedback offers, but I can always use more, so if you'll let me do some more, is there anything specifc of yours you want me to read?

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WhenItRains21 replied...
Mar. 22, 2013 at 6:23 pm

Sure! You can check out "The Script" or if you're up for it, I have a novella posted that I could always use feedback on. It's The Story of Ivy Hayes. Just let me know what you'd like in return!

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readaholicThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Mar. 22, 2013 at 7:15 pm

Sounds like a challenge (streaks war paint on face) so, since I'm so easy to manipulate, now i HAVE to read it (curse you reverse psychology!) but...maybe when I'm not supposed to be doing homework.  Read the other one, though (incerdible)
And for lil ol' me?  UG.  All my stuff is so old....really need to delete a lot...perhaps "Burning Cocoon, Flaming Butterfly"?  Promise I'll read your novella later, but for now, APUSH notes await!!

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carolinestarr replied...
Mar. 29, 2013 at 12:55 am

Hi! Can you please read and critique my pieces "Two Hearts" and "I Do Not Communicate With Words"? Thanks a bunch! :)

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holly1999This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Mar. 30, 2013 at 8:59 am

Can you please read my story Enchant, and The Secret to Happiness too if you can? Thanks! :)

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WhenItRains21 replied...
Mar. 30, 2013 at 10:17 am

Hi evsryone! I'm actually on vacation right now, but I'll get to all your stuff after this weekend!

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dagnytaggartThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Mar. 30, 2013 at 9:28 pm

Can you read my story, "The Oak Tree Brotherhood"? and my poem "Know That I Do"? 

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WhenItRains21 replied...
Apr. 3, 2013 at 9:46 pm

ALright, I've caught up with all of the reading! Holly1999, I still need to read Enchant, but that should be it! Thanks everyone for the great feedback. :)

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