Jan. 29 at 5:55 pm
Okay, i know i've already done the feedback thing with alot of frequent forum goers, but if anyone wants to read and comment on my new story Gone. I'll read one of yours(a different one if you saw my other thread) and another story if you also read and comment on Terrible Lovely or a different one of my stories. Thanks
Jan. 30 at 4:55 pm
I commented on Gone, it was really good.
Though I don't have any stories uploaded, if you could check out my thread Feedback: My Novel's Plot and give me your thoughts, I would greatly appreciate it.
Jan. 30 at 5:51 pm
I comented on Gone. Could you coment on one of my stories, thanks!
Jan. 30 at 7:14 pm
Zozey, I read the slave's story but I'm not sure the comment posted, I'll check back tomorrow and see, but that was great.
Jan. 30 at 7:30 pm
You've already read my book and commented on it, but I recently added a new chapter, so if you could read it and comment on it, I will go ahead and read yours. Thank you!
Jan. 31 at 7:26 pm
I read Gone. Could you please read and comment on my story Leaf Tornadoes?
Jan. 31 at 10:48 pm
i read and commented on your piece "Gone" it sounds alot like the piece i would like you to comment on, "how to save a life."
Feb. 1 at 10:00 am
I'll go comment on your piece, so could you please read Princess of Suburbia and comment?
Feb. 1 at 7:42 pm
I just commented on Gone (which I loved, by the way), and it would be awesome if you could comment on my story Headlights. Thank you!
Feb. 1 at 8:43 pm
mlf13, I'm looking for your story, but I can't find it, I can't even find your profile page...I really I'm clueless a to why I can't even access your page but is the story posted yet?
Feb. 3 at 10:14 pm
For me do: A Doctor on Mars please
Feb. 4 at 3:31 pm
Batman, I tried looking for you piece but I can't find it, has it been publsged yet?
Feb. 4 at 3:38 pm
i reviewed and commented on your peom gone
Feb. 4 at 4:01 pm
Jamie I commented on both of your poems, and they were great
Feb. 5 at 10:34 pm
I'll check out Gone and Terrible Lovely! Could you read/comment on Venice and The Script?
Feb. 6 at 11:28 am
I'm doing yours now, can you look at The "What If" Game? Thanks
Feb. 22 at 1:02 pm
hey whats up
Feb. 23 at 5:44 pm
umm...probably not much if I'm replying
Feb. 23 at 6:34 pm
I commented on Gone. I thought it was very well written. Can you please read and comment on my story release?