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Meena123This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. posted this thread...
Jan. 18 at 10:22 pm

Please tell me what you think about this story. Think about the following when replying.
Tell me what you think the story is about? Grammar mistakes? Is there a certain part that is hard to understand?  Give it a rating on a scale of 1-10.

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In_Love_with_WritingThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 24 at 7:45 pm

Where's the story?
 
Can you check out some of my work please?

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