I couldn't be caught! No, I had to get away. I am a free spirit...like the wild horses. I wonder if I could ever find them, if they will hide me, so I can be me a kindred spirit...on my own!
Not bad. Maybe if you fixed the format into a poem form or something. Cool :)
Can you comment and rate some of my work?
I like it because not only is it original, but it immedaitly draws your attention and makes you want to read more. Would you mind commenting on my new piece Lurkig Shadows?
THanks I will probably turn it into a story of somekind
I will read ur suff if I can find them