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Nightrunner23 replied...
Jan. 20, 2013 at 8:08 pm

"So tell me, where is it you plan to escape to know?  The door is the only way out, and it's locked, the window is there, but we are ten stories up," he continued over the speakers, "You're move girl."

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yeahthatsme replied...
Jan. 23, 2013 at 6:34 pm

"I.......I don't have a plan", I blurt out. He looks at me all skeptical. "You. YOU don't have a plan? You of all people, you ALWAYS HAVE A.....a plan." His voice softens to a whisper. "Why? Why did you do it?" He doesn't seem so intimidating right at this moment. He looks so vulnerable, so.....scared.

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Nightrunner23 replied...
Jan. 24, 2013 at 9:31 am

"You know why I did it, I have no choice.  They wanted to keep me there.  I couldn't.  You know my curse," I whispered.  He just watched me.

"Of course I know of the curse, was it not I who was first afflicted?"

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Nightrunner23 replied...
Feb. 3, 2013 at 7:43 am

"It's nice to finally meet the most wanted man in ht wordld," I said, a fake half smile on my face.  We were like mirrors of each other, same eyes and hair, about an inch apart in height.  We even had the same uncaring smirk.  "Why now?"

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ZozeyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 3, 2013 at 12:57 pm

The straps bit into my skin as I silently worked my wrists out. Looking into his uncaring eyes, I knew this run - this run would be the hardest yet of my life.

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Shooting-Starr replied...
Feb. 3, 2013 at 4:02 pm

He pulled out a gun and pointed it at me. "Dont even think about running." He walked up slowly with a victorious smirk, "You'r e going to help me."

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Nightrunner23 replied...
Feb. 4, 2013 at 7:18 pm

No, I can't help you.  Us being together will only make things worse, they'll find us for real!" I screamed at him. He just smirked, leveling the gun at my chest, exposed from where he had stripped my body armor away, leaving only my tanktop.

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Nightrunner23 replied...
Feb. 10, 2013 at 7:42 am

"Please, this is crazy!  What can I even do for you?" I said, trying to keep my voice level.

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nightrunner23 replied...
Mar. 2, 2013 at 9:17 pm

"You can get rid of the curse," he responded.  I took a step back away from the gun.
"How can I do that?" I asked.

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Shooting-Starr replied...
Mar. 6, 2013 at 11:17 am

"You know exactly how." His gaze burned into me as he placed the gun against my chest.

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NiaraTiara replied...
Mar. 10, 2013 at 9:44 pm

There was a long bitter silence in the atmosphere, as I stared at the ground. Finally, I spoke. "NO... there has to be another way..."

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WhenItRains21 replied...
Mar. 11, 2013 at 2:34 pm

"Well," he snorted, "there isn't. You know what you have to do."

I shook my head, swallowing the panic back. I couldn't do it. "I won't. I can't."

"You sure?" With a crooked grin, he cocked the gun.

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SaffronLily replied...
Mar. 12, 2013 at 6:31 am

For a moment, I just stopped thinking about what was going on around me. I stopped his echos of taunt and just imagined instead.
I imagined the sunset, the golden sun. And it was perfect. Simple.
But I stopped, when I heard the so well known sound of the click of his gun.
Maybe there was going to be a different kind of  sunset on the other end of this gun, but I didn't want to go there now.
I looked him in the eyes, and nodded. 'Ok...' I said. 

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nightrunner23 replied...
Mar. 16, 2013 at 1:14 pm

"That's what I thought.  I'll be watching you too, girl.  You make one wrong move and it's over.  We booth know the capabilities of the other.  Do you want to test who will win at this game," he said hostily, slapping her hard across the face with the gun. "Now do it."

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