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nerdlover17 posted this thread...
Jan. 14, 2013 at 2:30 pm

i would like some feedack on a very emotional piece to me called many reasons.
if you want feed back let me know I will give it too.

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KateyKat replied...
Jan. 14, 2013 at 6:01 pm

Oh my gosh what a beautiful piece, you are an amazing writer. Keep up the good work. When you get the chance could you please read and comment on my new piece called Lurking Shadows?

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nerdlover17 replied...
Jan. 29, 2013 at 3:20 pm

sure will do inbetween feeding my baby.

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Apollo77 replied...
Jan. 29, 2013 at 4:04 pm

just commented, that was beautiful! If you could look at my new piece called Gone. that would be great, or you know, whatever catches your eye on my page.

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nerdlover17 replied...
Feb. 18, 2013 at 11:31 am

Which Gone piece is it? I looked and found sevreal.

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WhenItRains21 replied...
Feb. 18, 2013 at 12:47 pm

Read and commented! I'm sorry that my comment is long, and I really hope it doesn't come across as harsh. Could you check out my piece "Voices"? It deals with a similar idea.

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nerdlover17 replied...
Feb. 19, 2013 at 10:44 am

by the way lurking was excelent

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E.J.MathewsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 19, 2013 at 2:05 pm

I will get right on it! Could you read my article "Dan the Ripper"?

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Feb. 19, 2013 at 3:26 pm

I'll make sure to do it. Can you check out any of mine? Whatever suits your fancy :)

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Artgirl1999This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 20, 2013 at 8:00 am

InLoveWithWriting's pieces are really good. ;)

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Feb. 20, 2013 at 9:00 am

That was so sad and beautiful, especially the end. I do think you could make your sentences longer, but the mood of the piece was just incredible. You captured a life very well!
 
Could you possibly check out Let the Mountains Speak? Thanks!

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nerdlover17 replied...
Feb. 21, 2013 at 10:19 am

It was a good comment. I don't mind people helping me

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