i would like some feedack on a very emotional piece to me called many reasons.
if you want feed back let me know I will give it too.
Oh my gosh what a beautiful piece, you are an amazing writer. Keep up the good work. When you get the chance could you please read and comment on my new piece called Lurking Shadows?
sure will do inbetween feeding my baby.
just commented, that was beautiful! If you could look at my new piece called Gone. that would be great, or you know, whatever catches your eye on my page.
Which Gone piece is it? I looked and found sevreal.
Read and commented! I'm sorry that my comment is long, and I really hope it doesn't come across as harsh. Could you check out my piece "Voices"? It deals with a similar idea.
by the way lurking was excelent
I will get right on it! Could you read my article "Dan the Ripper"?
I'll make sure to do it. Can you check out any of mine? Whatever suits your fancy :)
InLoveWithWriting's pieces are really good. ;)
That was so sad and beautiful, especially the end. I do think you could make your sentences longer, but the mood of the piece was just incredible. You captured a life very well!
Could you possibly check out Let the Mountains Speak? Thanks!
It was a good comment. I don't mind people helping me