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The rewriting of Colrez part 1

BirthOfTime posted this thread...
Jan. 12 at 1:28 am

Ok, I've taken down Colrez due to needing revision and that I want to add parts in that hint to the end of the plot. Its hard to explain, but what type of hints would you like to see? Like, glimpses of certain people, or things in the news within the story?
And for those that read the original Colrez, I thank you for being beta readers, and hope that you stick around for the revision. It will be at least 10x better than the original!

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KateyKatThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 14 at 6:20 pm

Great, I can't wait to read it!

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