Jan. 10 at 2:13 pm
It you will give feedback on my one story, "The Voyages of the Waved Albatross," I'lol do the same for two of theirs! If you are interested in honest, straight forward comments, come here.
Jan. 10 at 3:18 pm
I'll take you up on that. Read whatever you want of mine. :)
Jan. 10 at 3:20 pm
Read whatever you want on my profile. I'll take you up on this offer and go look at your work now.
Jan. 10 at 10:50 pm
I have to say, well done there! The story was beautifully descriptive, even if it seemed a little long. Maybe if the descriptions were shortened just the smallest bit more, more attention would be brought to it. Other than that, the dialogue was wonderful! I do enjoy stories with rich plot. If you could, please give feedback and advice on my story, Colrez. And keep on writing my friend.
Jan. 11 at 3:41 pm
I'm off to read "The Voyages of the Waved Albatross", would you mind taking a look at my new piece Lurking Shadows? Thanks, have an awesome day!
Jan. 11 at 9:35 pm
Challenge accepted :D take a look at whatever you want of mine, and ill rate/comment
Jan. 11 at 9:40 pm
could you read any of my articles? i'll go read/rate/comment right now! thanks!
Jan. 12 at 2:44 pm
If you think those discriptions were long, read the Lord of the Rings Trilogy.
Jan. 13 at 2:22 pm
I'll get started reading your story right now but in return I would love if you'd read the first two chapters of my story "Starving for perfection and craving affection"
Jan. 14 at 8:42 pm
Hi,! I'll go read your article now, you could read anything that appeals to you on my page!
Jan. 14 at 10:06 pm
Can you read any of mine if you haven't already?
Jan. 15 at 1:31 pm
I am almost finished with the fifth chapter of my book, and anyone who reads it and comments, even if they have already commented on my book, I will do the same for another of theirs.
Jan. 19 at 8:56 am
I have just added the fourth chapter of my book, and it has been posted.
Feb. 9 at 10:29 am
Anybody there....?
Feb. 11 at 3:46 pm
I'll have to come back to it and it might take me a while, but I'd be happy to read your story:) Could you read my piece called Transgressions? It's very short!
replied...Thank you, I'll get on it immediately.
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