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AthenaMarisaDeterminedbyFateThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. posted this thread...
Dec. 6, 2012 at 8:45 am

All I need you to do is rate and comment on my newest action-adventure piece Fire and Ice. In return, you may list up to three pieces that are not incredibly long (like no novels, please), and I will rate and comment on them. 

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Dec. 6, 2012 at 8:46 am

Well you can do a novel, but if you choose a novel, then that's it. 

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WhenItRains21 replied...
Dec. 6, 2012 at 7:03 pm

I commented and rated. If you could check out The Script, Voices, and Venice, that would be great!

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Dec. 6, 2012 at 7:54 pm

Sure, no problem!

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Allicat001 replied...
Dec. 8, 2012 at 2:20 pm

Just read and commented on "Fire and Ice", great job by the way!  I would really appreciate it if you could read just the first chapter to my novel Catch me if you Can and tell me what you think.  Thank you so much!

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Dec. 8, 2012 at 5:42 pm

Thanks! And of course, I'd love to read your first chapter.

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Dec. 8, 2012 at 6:02 pm

Allitcat001 -- my computer doesn't allow me to rate novels for some unknown reason, so I commented, and I love the story!

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Allicat001 replied...
Dec. 8, 2012 at 7:03 pm

That's okay, thank you so much! :)

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Dec. 9, 2012 at 9:06 pm

That was undoubtedly the closest I've come to crying when I read an article on Teenink. 

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Dec. 12, 2012 at 9:48 pm

Note: I never cry when I read books or movies, but when I read your CIA article, I came really close to sobs (which is my way of saying that you did a really good job, because you almost drove me to tears).

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24601This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Dec. 13, 2012 at 4:16 pm

Okay, I'm game! I'll look at your story, and in return can you check my piece 'what if?" and my two drawings "circulation" and "brainwaves"

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Dec. 13, 2012 at 6:17 pm

Sure, sounds great!

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Dec. 13, 2012 at 6:23 pm

Note: My computer is weird and only lets me rate articles at the present time (I am only just figuring this out), but I can comment on your drawings, and if my computer stops freaking out, I will be able to rate them as soon as I can.

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Dec. 14, 2012 at 2:01 pm

Commented, and rated! Could you check out my poem, ALPHABET, my short story, Chocolate, Warnings, and Eternity, and my short story, Bubbling in the Future (if it's up yet; I only submitted it on Monday.) If it isn't up yet, you can look at any of my other peices. Huge thanks!

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Dec. 14, 2012 at 6:16 pm

Okay, sounds great!

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CammyS replied...
Dec. 15, 2012 at 12:43 pm

I really liked Fire and Ice- very good work. I feel like you've read my work already, but if there is something you haven't read (and I may be mistaken- you may have not read anything) then commenting would be very helpful.

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Dec. 15, 2012 at 8:31 pm

Sure I will. 

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KateyKatThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 17, 2013 at 12:09 am

Oh my gosh what an excellent piece. I think I've read it before but I'm not sure because I'm positive I would have remembered THAT! When you get a chance please read and comment on my new piece Lurking Shadows, I hope you feel the same way about mine.

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guardianofthestarsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 17, 2013 at 9:48 am

I'll take you up on this :) I don't care what you read of mine, Athena, just pick the three that catch you eye. Thanks ^___^

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