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I need help with a title...

JunieSparrow posted this thread...
Dec. 3, 2012 at 3:02 pm

Hi everyone, I've finished working on a short story, but I can't come up with an appropriate title.  I don't want something that gives away the plot, but I want it to make sense with the story. 
Here's the link: 
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If you give me a suggestion I'll rate a piece of your work.  If I choose your suggestion, I'll rate two pieces, and comment on one work of your choice. 

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like2dreamlots replied...
Dec. 4, 2012 at 12:38 am

First of all, great story! The words that came to my mind were sabotage, betrayal, and freedom/liberty, so maybe you could do something like The Betrayal or Sabotage of Liberty or Betraying Freedom.

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JunieSparrow replied...
Dec. 7, 2012 at 6:14 pm

Thanks for your suggestions, I think I've decided on a title.  It looks like you haven't submitted any pieces yet, so I'm not sure if you want me to rate something or not . . . if you do tell me what. 

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