Hi everyone, I've finished working on a short story, but I can't come up with an appropriate title. I don't want something that gives away the plot, but I want it to make sense with the story.
Here's the link:
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If you give me a suggestion I'll rate a piece of your work. If I choose your suggestion, I'll rate two pieces, and comment on one work of your choice.
First of all, great story! The words that came to my mind were sabotage, betrayal, and freedom/liberty, so maybe you could do something like The Betrayal or Sabotage of Liberty or Betraying Freedom.
Thanks for your suggestions, I think I've decided on a title. It looks like you haven't submitted any pieces yet, so I'm not sure if you want me to rate something or not . . . if you do tell me what.