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JunieSparrowThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. posted this thread...
Dec. 3, 2012 at 3:02 pm

Hi everyone, I've finished working on a short story, but I can't come up with an appropriate title.  I don't want something that gives away the plot, but I want it to make sense with the story. 
 
Here's the link: 
 
ht tps://docs.google.c om/file/d/0B6fp3Da4aGunVFZhMFduNm43Nm8/edit?pli=1
 
If you give me a suggestion I'll rate a piece of your work.  If I choose your suggestion, I'll rate two pieces, and comment on one work of your choice. 
 
Thanks!

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like2dreamlotsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Dec. 4, 2012 at 12:38 am

First of all, great story! The words that came to my mind were sabotage, betrayal, and freedom/liberty, so maybe you could do something like The Betrayal or Sabotage of Liberty or Betraying Freedom.

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JunieSparrowThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Dec. 7, 2012 at 6:14 pm

Thanks for your suggestions, I think I've decided on a title.  It looks like you haven't submitted any pieces yet, so I'm not sure if you want me to rate something or not . . . if you do tell me what. 

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