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I'd Love to Critique Your Story

Imani B. posted this thread...
Nov. 29, 2012 at 4:25 pm

Anyone who needs feedback on a story can ask me. Id be glad to help! :)

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Imani B. replied...
Nov. 29, 2012 at 5:00 pm

Of course! :) I'll get on it as soon as I can.

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KenyaLove41 replied...
Nov. 29, 2012 at 6:52 pm

i have two stories that i'd like you to read but if you could take a look at "the Waiting room" and leave a comment that would be greatly appericated.(;

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poemluv replied...
Nov. 30, 2012 at 12:22 pm

I would LOVE it if you would read my story "Before You"! (please) :)

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guardianofthestarsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 30, 2012 at 12:30 pm

COuld you read my story Cupid?

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Katsa08 replied...
Nov. 30, 2012 at 1:46 pm

Could you please read "In Between Spaces - Chapter 1" in the scifi/fantasy section? Thank you!

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Gabrielle K. This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 30, 2012 at 8:57 pm

Coud you please read my short story?  It's called Bound; Deaths Story.  Thank you!

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MemoriesOfTheFlame replied...
Nov. 30, 2012 at 9:59 pm

Would you mind reading and critiquing my story "Chronicles Of The Ended Earth"? No ones given me feedback and I'm wondering if I should just scrap it.

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WSwilliams replied...
Dec. 1, 2012 at 11:46 am

Hi! Could you look at a story called "Outlander". i just posted it and it could use some feedback. I can't really offer feedback on your stories at the moment, but if there's anytihng you want me to see, I'll try to make time for it.

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MidnightFire replied...
Dec. 1, 2012 at 4:08 pm

Thanks!! I've got a book-story but it's posted by chapter ... its a long sereis though so just read anything that catches your eye :) (if you want to read the book-story it's Drizzle, Tracked, Escape, Kerosene and so on :) ) Thanks again!

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Dec. 2, 2012 at 4:31 pm

Would you mind reading and critiquing my book The Ace of Spades?  Some feedback would be really helpful on that one. Thanks! :)

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CammyS replied...
Dec. 3, 2012 at 8:01 am

If you read basically anything of mine I'd appreciate it! Thank you so much!

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Snowflakes replied...
Dec. 3, 2012 at 2:27 pm

If you could read anything of mine, that would be awesome :D 

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WhenItRains21 replied...
Dec. 6, 2012 at 6:35 pm

It would be great if you could read and comment on any of my short stories, "The Script" in particular. Thanks!

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JacksGThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Dec. 7, 2012 at 1:30 am

Could you read my story? I'd really appreciate it! Just click link TeenInk.com/college_guide/college_essays/article/497260/Reverse-Psycology/

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Elizabeth-of-rohan replied...
Dec. 7, 2012 at 6:16 am

Hey! I have  a short story that I'm looking to publish, and I was wondering if you would give me some feedback on it? 

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KnitsandPurls replied...
Dec. 8, 2012 at 6:36 pm

Thank you so much for offering feed-back! This is really nice of you! I will definitely read some of your work.
I have a short story called "She is a Dancer". If you enjoy it, I have lots of other pieces posted.
Thanks again!
--KnitsAndPurls
 

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iam4evermyself replied...
Dec. 8, 2012 at 8:51 pm

Please view my poems. Thaks

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AXLRgirl2420 replied...
Dec. 10, 2012 at 8:18 am

Hello! I have a short story that needs some feedback on it. It apparently is getting quite popular on here, but no one is commenting!! It's called "When We Are Together- A Ronnie and Julius Story". Thanks!

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Dec. 13, 2012 at 12:25 pm

I would be much obliged if you took the time to critique my story December Dawn. Thank you!

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