Anyone who needs feedback on a story can ask me. Id be glad to help! :)
Could you read my story(s) I want to go home. and/or Lewis 'Chesty' Puller: Going Where the Guns Are ?
Of course! :) I'll get on it as soon as I can.
i have two stories that i'd like you to read but if you could take a look at "the Waiting room" and leave a comment that would be greatly appericated.(;
I would LOVE it if you would read my story "Before You"! (please) :)
COuld you read my story Cupid?
Could you please read "In Between Spaces - Chapter 1" in the scifi/fantasy section? Thank you!
Coud you please read my short story? It's called Bound; Deaths Story. Thank you!
Would you mind reading and critiquing my story "Chronicles Of The Ended Earth"? No ones given me feedback and I'm wondering if I should just scrap it.
Hi! Could you look at a story called "Outlander". i just posted it and it could use some feedback. I can't really offer feedback on your stories at the moment, but if there's anytihng you want me to see, I'll try to make time for it.
Thanks!! I've got a book-story but it's posted by chapter ... its a long sereis though so just read anything that catches your eye :) (if you want to read the book-story it's Drizzle, Tracked, Escape, Kerosene and so on :) ) Thanks again!
Would you mind reading and critiquing my book The Ace of Spades? Some feedback would be really helpful on that one. Thanks! :)
If you read basically anything of mine I'd appreciate it! Thank you so much!
If you could read anything of mine, that would be awesome :D
It would be great if you could read and comment on any of my short stories, "The Script" in particular. Thanks!
Could you read my story? I'd really appreciate it! Just click link TeenInk.com/college_guide/college_essays/article/497260/Reverse-Psycology/
Hey! I have a short story that I'm looking to publish, and I was wondering if you would give me some feedback on it?
Thank you so much for offering feed-back! This is really nice of you! I will definitely read some of your work.
I have a short story called "She is a Dancer". If you enjoy it, I have lots of other pieces posted.
Please view my poems. Thaks
Hello! I have a short story that needs some feedback on it. It apparently is getting quite popular on here, but no one is commenting!! It's called "When We Are Together- A Ronnie and Julius Story". Thanks!