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Constriticism (constructive criticism)

Crunchman99 posted this thread...
Nov. 4, 2012 at 7:16 pm

Okay. I need someone who is a good critic... well, that means pretty much anybody. I need someone to check out my story 'Fabula Imperium' and give some constriticism on it. I haven't really written any long stories yet, so this is my first try. First time for everything, right? Anyway, I would appreciate the help.

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Nov. 4, 2012 at 8:13 pm

So you know Latin :) (just judging by the title)

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Snowflakes replied...
Nov. 5, 2012 at 10:38 am

Okay so I tried to find your story, but it didn't show up when I clicked on you... so mission failed there o.O. However I did read your poem which was pretty awesome :) 

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Crunchman99 replied...
Nov. 5, 2012 at 4:02 pm

I just added another chapter to the story, so check on it later. It should be back up soon.

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Crunchman99 replied...
Nov. 6, 2012 at 6:34 am

The story's back up if you want to read it.

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Crunchman99 replied...
Nov. 6, 2012 at 6:34 am

The story's back up if you want to read it.

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Snowflakes replied...
Nov. 6, 2012 at 9:41 am

Understood :) I'll get to it asap :) 

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Maya S. replied...
Nov. 10, 2012 at 12:53 pm

I'd love to read it!

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MayaS. replied...
Nov. 11, 2012 at 12:02 pm

OK, so the site won't let me post any more comments on the book itself, so I'll post them here in the forum........Chapter 5: Callidus and his high-tech weaponry = lol. Annie's ears regulating sound for her = awesome detail. I'm jealous of this chapter because there's a part in my book (TeenInk.com/novels/sci_fi_fantasy/book/106014/The-Secretary/7/) that has a similar weapons chamber but it's nowhere near as funny

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