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Allicat001 replied...
Dec. 3, 2012 at 10:12 pm

Could you read just the first chapter in my book Catch me if you Can and tell me what you think? I would really appreciate some constructive criticism on it.  Thank you so much and if you ever want me to comment on anything for you, just let me know :)

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CammyS replied...
Dec. 4, 2012 at 5:18 pm

I love, love, love your story Allicat001! Keep writing!

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mysterySanity replied...
Dec. 4, 2012 at 10:35 pm

If you are still reading people's work, could you take a look at the one I posted?  I kind of want to make it a novel, but I'm not completely sure if that would be a good idea.  Thank you either way. ^^

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CammyS replied...
Dec. 5, 2012 at 7:59 am

I would be more than happy to read your work, MysterySanity, but it's not on your profile. What I'm guessing is that you really recently submitted it, right? Well, it takes a couple days for the story to get approved by the editors and appear on the website. So I'll check in a couple days and see if I can read it then, okay? Another thing that might have happened is that you posted it under Anonyomus, but I'm guessing it was the former, not the latter. I hope this helps, and don't worry, I'm not trying to get out of reading your story.

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JacksG replied...
Dec. 7, 2012 at 1:27 am

Could you please give me some feedback on mine? I'd appreciate it ! Just click link TeenInk.com/college_guide/college_essays/article/497260/Reverse-Psycology/

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Aswin.A replied...
Dec. 7, 2012 at 11:38 pm

Yo, could you review my work too ? It's under Sci-Fi/Fantasy - A Rainy Day

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Aswin.A replied...
Dec. 7, 2012 at 11:38 pm

- and rate it too..5 if possible

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Elizabeth-of-rohanThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Dec. 8, 2012 at 2:24 am

I don't have any stories on here yet but I was wondering if you would read a short story of mine? I'm looking to publish in the near future. :)

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KnitsandPurls replied...
Dec. 8, 2012 at 12:11 pm

Thank you so much for your offer! I love it when people are willing to give feed-back without asking for anything in return. I will read some of your work for sure.
I have a short story entitled "She is a Dancer". If you enjoy it, I have many other pieces posted.

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WhenItRains21 replied...
Dec. 8, 2012 at 3:05 pm

Could you please check out my short stories "The Script" and "Venice"?
Thanks!

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CammyS replied...
Dec. 8, 2012 at 5:50 pm

I would be happy to read it, but how am I to read it if it isn't on the site, Elizabeth-of-rohan? If it's on a forum, please give me the link, or if it just hasn't been approved yet, please alert me when it does get approved. Thank you!

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KnitsandPurls replied...
Dec. 8, 2012 at 6:31 pm

Thanks for reading my work. I appreciate it a lot.
--KnitsAndPurls

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CammyS replied...
Dec. 13, 2012 at 6:20 pm

Does anyone else desire feedback? Sorry for taking so long, I had a busy week.

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IMSteelThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Dec. 22, 2012 at 3:02 pm

Whoa!  It looks like you've attracted quite the crowd! If you could read two chapters of my book: The Voyages of the Waved Albatross, I would really appreciate it.  I'll read some of your stuff too, I insist. 

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marchbutterflyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Dec. 22, 2012 at 7:20 pm

Can you please read my short story The Unexpected

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CammyS replied...
Dec. 23, 2012 at 8:16 am

Great stories everybody!

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CammyS replied...
Dec. 29, 2012 at 3:01 pm

Would anyone else like some feedback?

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Enderman replied...
Jan. 8, 2013 at 8:45 pm

I would appreciate it if you would read my poem "Where Once Happiness Lived."  If you read the others it would be great, but this poem is my priority. Thanks.

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WhenItRains21 replied...
Jan. 8, 2013 at 8:56 pm

It'd be really super great if you could check out some of my stuff :) If you're up for it, I've got a novella, The Story of Ivy Hayes, that could use some feedback, but I also have short stories if you'd rather read something shorter. :P Thanks!

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Tessa J. replied...
Jan. 8, 2013 at 10:03 pm

I'd love some feedback on my poem Indecision! It's not super long, but any critiques would be helpful!

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