Dec. 3, 2012 at 10:12 pm
Could you read just the first chapter in my book Catch me if you Can and tell me what you think? I would really appreciate some constructive criticism on it. Thank you so much and if you ever want me to comment on anything for you, just let me know :)
Dec. 4, 2012 at 5:18 pm
I love, love, love your story Allicat001! Keep writing!
Dec. 4, 2012 at 10:35 pm
If you are still reading people's work, could you take a look at the one I posted? I kind of want to make it a novel, but I'm not completely sure if that would be a good idea. Thank you either way. ^^
Dec. 5, 2012 at 7:59 am
I would be more than happy to read your work, MysterySanity, but it's not on your profile. What I'm guessing is that you really recently submitted it, right? Well, it takes a couple days for the story to get approved by the editors and appear on the website. So I'll check in a couple days and see if I can read it then, okay? Another thing that might have happened is that you posted it under Anonyomus, but I'm guessing it was the former, not the latter. I hope this helps, and don't worry, I'm not trying to get out of reading your story.
Dec. 7, 2012 at 1:27 am
Could you please give me some feedback on mine? I'd appreciate it ! Just click link http://www.teenink.com/college_guide/college_essays/article/497260/Reverse-Psycology/
Dec. 7, 2012 at 11:38 pm
Yo, could you review my work too ? It's under Sci-Fi/Fantasy - A Rainy Day
Dec. 7, 2012 at 11:38 pm
- and rate it too..5 if possible
Dec. 8, 2012 at 2:24 am
I don't have any stories on here yet but I was wondering if you would read a short story of mine? I'm looking to publish in the near future. :)
Dec. 8, 2012 at 12:11 pm
Thank you so much for your offer! I love it when people are willing to give feed-back without asking for anything in return. I will read some of your work for sure.
I have a short story entitled "She is a Dancer". If you enjoy it, I have many other pieces posted.
Dec. 8, 2012 at 3:05 pm
Could you please check out my short stories "The Script" and "Venice"?
Thanks!
Dec. 8, 2012 at 5:50 pm
I would be happy to read it, but how am I to read it if it isn't on the site, Elizabeth-of-rohan? If it's on a forum, please give me the link, or if it just hasn't been approved yet, please alert me when it does get approved. Thank you!
Dec. 8, 2012 at 6:31 pm
Thanks for reading my work. I appreciate it a lot.
--KnitsAndPurls
Dec. 13, 2012 at 6:20 pm
Does anyone else desire feedback? Sorry for taking so long, I had a busy week.
Dec. 22, 2012 at 3:02 pm
Whoa! It looks like you've attracted quite the crowd! If you could read two chapters of my book: The Voyages of the Waved Albatross, I would really appreciate it. I'll read some of your stuff too, I insist.
Dec. 22, 2012 at 7:20 pm
Can you please read my short story The Unexpected?
Dec. 23, 2012 at 8:16 am
Great stories everybody!
Dec. 29, 2012 at 3:01 pm
Would anyone else like some feedback?
Jan. 8 at 8:45 pm
I would appreciate it if you would read my poem "Where Once Happiness Lived." If you read the others it would be great, but this poem is my priority. Thanks.
Jan. 8 at 8:56 pm
It'd be really super great if you could check out some of my stuff :) If you're up for it, I've got a novella, The Story of Ivy Hayes, that could use some feedback, but I also have short stories if you'd rather read something shorter. :P Thanks!
Jan. 8 at 10:03 pm
I'd love some feedback on my poem Indecision! It's not super long, but any critiques would be helpful!