Jul. 17, 2012 at 7:19 pm
Okay, Kenya, I read your story.
Jul. 18, 2012 at 7:30 pm
Hi, Waffuleez! Could you comment on my short story titled In the Music and my poem titled The Perfect Fit? Thanks!!! :)
Jul. 18, 2012 at 8:15 pm
I read both your story and your poem, InkWriter :)
Jul. 19, 2012 at 10:23 am
Could you check out my work "Terror in the Night" as well as "The Secret of the City of Gold"?
Jul. 19, 2012 at 11:29 am
I read, rated, and commented on your work primepower.
Jul. 19, 2012 at 5:01 pm
Hello! I won't give you any specific title to look at other than one called "Imaginary. It may have some tense problems, but only because it is my earliest work. Also, please read at least 3 pieces of my work and pick whatever interests you. In exchange, I'll look at yours too. Thanks!
Jul. 19, 2012 at 5:17 pm
Haha, that's quite a list, WSwilliams. Alright, well, I'm falling behind in my RolePlays, so I'll check out your work either later tonight or tomorrow morning. Either way, I will read, rate, and comment :)
Jul. 19, 2012 at 7:02 pm
could you please read my poem vigil? feel free to pick it apart if you wish
Jul. 19, 2012 at 7:09 pm
these-roses: I read your poem; it won't let me post a comment right now. I'll try in a few moments to at least rate it. Either way, I liked it. It was a little short, but I still enjoyed it :)
WSwilliams: I will get to your story and other written works most likely tomorrow morning. I tried doing it on my iPod, but this stupid thing is being temperamental.
Jul. 19, 2012 at 8:39 pm
Gothcha ;) I'll look at yours as soon as I get to someone else.
Jul. 20, 2012 at 7:51 am
I read, rated, and commented on your work, WSwilliams :)
Jul. 23, 2012 at 1:29 pm
Well...what do I have to lose? I have four stories online here at TeenInk. Could you read one? 1) Gone in the Night 2) The Protector 3) Missing 4) Chosen Thanks! :)
Jul. 23, 2012 at 1:59 pm
Okay. I read, rated, and commented on your story Chosen, FlameSeeker
Jul. 24, 2012 at 8:57 pm
Thanks a lot!!!! :)
Jul. 25, 2012 at 12:46 pm
Thanks for offering free feedback! I could really use your opinion on my fiction story Hanging Town, it is a novel, but I would be gracious if you only read the first chapter. Here is the link http://www.teenink.com/novels/thriller_mystery/book/100299/The-Hanging-Town/ Thanks again!!
Jul. 26, 2012 at 4:14 pm
hey, I'd love for you to take a look at my first piece "I remembered", thank you so much! x http://teenink.com/fiction/romance/article/478502/I-remembered/
Jul. 26, 2012 at 5:29 pm
Would you look at my poem in the forums under "Any Advice?" And if you're going to be a teacher, you might as well get used to handing out F's. I don't mind!
Thanks for doing this.
P.S. I wouldn't mind comments on any of the work published on the site, but most of those were written so long ago that changes aren't really going to happen. But you might enjoy a laugh.
Jul. 26, 2012 at 5:59 pm
I commented on your poem, Eirias :)
Jul. 28, 2012 at 2:19 pm
It would be really great if you would rate and comment on my novel Starving for love and craving affection, feedback negative or positive would be greatly appreciated
Jul. 28, 2012 at 3:04 pm
I'm really sorry Marchbutterfly. I'm not offering feedback on novels yet. However, I'd be more than happy to look at short stories or poems of yours.
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