Write Happy Hobby in the search bar if you want to give feedback to my haiku.
I read your story and it was like you describe the picture. I didn't get it. What was it? By the way, I like the description and the way you wrote it. Maybe, you could add more and maybe you could complete the story. Hope my feedback helped. =)
Feel free to review either my article or my two-chapter novel on my profile. I read your piece, and I was very impressed! :D
I just read all your stuff, and god, i <3 it
Mother Nature, realistic fiction. Not too sensitive myself, so have at it.
Can you please rate and comment on "Stacy Hallmark..." and "Who I Am Today" or "Be Patient"?
I'd love some constructive criticism on any of my short stories or novel. The shorter ones are:
"The Best Workout" - a realistic fiction short story.
"Captain Charlotte Morgan"- a historical fiction short story.
"The Push Up" - also a realistic fiction short story.
My novels called "Fields and Land" & it's a fantasy fiction novel.
I'd appreciate any feed back at this point, so thanks! & i'll look into your writing as well!
Could you check out my poem 'The Master'? Thank you!
Hey, I've commented on your story (very good). I'd really appreciate it if you had a look at "A Demons Contract"; I posted it as a book, but it is only four chapters and is no longer than a short/long story.
If you would rather/want to read any other pieces I have posted, please, feel free. Thanks :)
Hey Bookworm! If you have time, could you look at my story Dodger? I really need some critiques! I need anything from grammar to plot, as long as it's honest!
If you don't have time, I understand, but thanks.
I'll read it. Could you check out my story Saving Humanity? Thanks!
First article.... check it out?
These will be found in the poetry and image sections. Would you please comment on my works "Was Is My Interrogative", "IDkreeper", "A Poem for Mother's Day", and "Breaking the Ice." See my picute "Midnight's Stare".
Drip. (poetry section) Each Unique Weirdness (poetry) Delicious Days (poetry) Thanks! I will rate your stuff as well.
That would be very nice of you to do so. Can you comment "AskAllie" Magazine Placement and "Volunteering @ My Local Library". If you would like check out "Breaking the Ice"
Snack Time and my newest piece and The Lullaby Tune if its published on here soon enough. Nobody really gives me extremely critical criticism on my stuff and I'm pretty sure it's not cause it's great. Thanks so much!
I would really appreciate it if you would look at my story "Dragons in the Cottonwood Tree". It is non-fiction and under personal experience, but you could also find it on my page. Thank you and I will look at "Memories" for you.
Could you give me feedback on my short story "Hunting for Admiration" or my poem "Phoenix Rising?" :)
could you read my short story, "Clouds"?
My Nine-Part series is titled Prey. It is in the Sci-Fi section. Each part has reached #1, but none have comments yet. Also for people who may be on this forum and follow my work, I have a new short-story in the works which will be a sports memoir. Thank you.
I would love your feedback on my romance short story: Fairtales Stolen