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Thirsty for critisizm?

bookworm29 posted this thread...
May 13, 2011 at 8:39 pm

Thirsty for critisizm? Post the title of your article along with which section its in and I'll critisize it (Constructively of course) or compliment it. Don't forget to check out my very first realistic fiction piece called "Memories." I know not very original but it fits with the story (even though the 'story' is only a paragraph)

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fraggot698 replied...
May 13, 2011 at 9:09 pm

Wanna check out my poem Bcuz Of U? I also have a thread posted somewhere with what could be the beginning of a story. Could you check tht out 2? & I'll check out ur story :)

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Katsa08 replied...
May 14, 2011 at 12:15 am

My poem Writer: Mind's Eye? Thank you!

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AddictedToWriting replied...
May 14, 2011 at 2:56 am

Article?  Hm...I don't really have any of those worth criticizing.  Um, would you be okay reading like the first, maybe second, chapter of my novel-in-progress, Now You See It (Working Title)?  It's on page one of Most Discussed Sci-Fi/Fantasy Novels. If you're okay with this, let me know, or just comment, and I'll get on your piece right away!

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dreamer759 replied...
May 14, 2011 at 5:58 am

If you're ok with reading novels, mine is called AKA Subject A (I'm no good with titles . . .) and I would really appreciate whatever you have to say. I'd love to read some of your stuff too.

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PaRaNoRmAl627 replied...
May 14, 2011 at 10:19 am

id love it if you could check out my piece called "war opinion letter." thankss :)

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DaylightDarkness replied...
May 14, 2011 at 6:36 pm

I'd greatly appreciate it if you would look at my novel, Rose of Thorns, even only the first chapter. Ill give you forewarning though, it is a little longer than the average chapter length on teenink.

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Cmt137 replied...
May 15, 2011 at 9:15 am

Hi! Please check out/rate my piece Ghost Town, in the Thriller/Mystery section. I know it's long, but I'd really appreciate some feedback since it's my first one up here and I think the length scares away commenters. I'll definitely check yours out though, thanks!

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bookworm29 replied...
May 15, 2011 at 10:28 am

can u post the link; I cant find this one.

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Cmt137 replied...
May 15, 2011 at 3:01 pm

I'm trying but it's not going through when i post

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Garnet77 replied...
May 16, 2011 at 4:08 am

Could you check out my article Possibilities and a Coffee Shop (revised)? Just search the title and it'll come up. It's in the romance section if that doesn't work. Thanks! :) I'll go check your story out right now!

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IntrepidRose replied...
May 16, 2011 at 7:46 am

Please read my two-part thriller/mystery story titled Teenage Bookie. I would also appreciate if you would read the start of a novel called Destiny also a thriller/mystery. (In the novel section).  This last one isn't very long so far. By the way, I'm going to read your piece right now.

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TatielThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 17, 2011 at 9:12 am

I'd love it if you'd check out some of my stuff! Especially the poems I have posted, Time To Heal and Collapse. =) If you'd comment and rate them, that would be epic =) Thanks!

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soccergoalie6 replied...
May 17, 2011 at 5:21 pm

Taken, non fiction short story

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soccergoalie6 replied...
May 17, 2011 at 5:22 pm

oops i meant fiction  

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bookworm29 replied...
Jun. 8, 2011 at 3:33 pm

Completed.

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CarrieAnn13 replied...
Jun. 8, 2011 at 4:39 pm

If you could read and comment on my short novel, 'Romeo and Juliet--A Parody' (it can be found by clicking on my screen name) that would be great.  I'll definitely check out your work too!

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JoPepperThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 8, 2011 at 6:55 pm

Can you please read my story Death From Angels it should show up when you type it in.  Thanks!!! :)

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Alon_Freevoice replied...
Jun. 9, 2011 at 12:30 am

Hello, bookworm29! Can you please check out my essay LGBT Community? Just type LGBT Community in the search bar and it will be there.

Please rate it too, depending how you like it

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.Izzy. replied...
Jun. 9, 2011 at 11:56 pm

I'd love to read it(: Do you mind reading my short story, The Murder of My Brother?

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