I only guarenteed on question I could ask! lol.. Good job i'd rate her an eight. :)
I have another character. Her name's Breezy Sauleovitch. She's a native Long Islander, half Italian and half Russian, and although her accent isn't the strongest she occasionally pronounces "God" like "Gawd," "mozzarella,"like"mahtzarella"and "pastrami" like "pastrommy." She is 14 years old and in a band called Little Oak Grove with her 5 best friends, who are all boys. Although I'm sure this is raising a few eyebrows right now, she and her freinds are very innocent-minded, or at least relatively.
She doesn't watch a lot of TV and her hobbies include playing guitar, writing, acting and comedy. She is physically a very beautiful girl--gooseberry green eyes and curls of rich dark hair--although she has a slightly self-deprecating sense of humor and loves mocking her nose, which she says is "so big the doctor saw me in my mother's stomach and asked if she'd swallowed a velociraptor."
Her father is a financial advisor and her mother owns a small cheese shop. She lives in an old, pre-Victorian house with her 3 little sister, 12-year-old Yelena (Laney), and the 10-year-old twins Tatiana and Julia (Julie). She has a very diverse music taste, citing genres like classic rock, alternative rock, and underground hip-hop as favorites.
Name: General Waru (First name unknown)
Appearance: Has jet black hair with a red tint, and eyepatch over her missing eye where her skin has supprisingly grown over the eye socket. Is about 5 foot 3 inches. Is cocasion with a very light blue eye that makes her appear demented and evil (Hint, Hint). Normally wears black combat boots and a long ripped red cape with hood.
Personality: Is very develish, enjoys making people suffer especially those who betray her. She loves having a laugh, like when she throws humans she doesn't like in a pit of fire or hungry animals. She does however love dogs and her most trusted official Advisory.
Bio: Was abandoned by her real parents who were a King and Queen, the Queen dying and was running around forests when she ran into a man in a dark cloak whose name was Marcus Waru. After killing her knew father because of his curelty she became an evil villian unknown to the heros fighting eachother.
i give her an 8. She's exttremely dynamic and interesting. I like the fact that she's both hateful and actually kinda......how do I say htis? Relatable? Anyway, tell me what you think of Breezy!
I rate Breezy as 9, she is very relatable to me I have 7 main friends who are all guys, side from slight accent, what would be the major problem in the book?