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Aqua. posted this thread...
Oct. 15, 2013 at 10:34 pm

I fell down
Into the dark abyss
Not once
Nor twice
More than three times
Those cold December nights
I had no one
To assure
It was okay
Or it was alright
It felt so lonely
Trying to fight while
I'm frozen up inside
Feeling so alone
So hopless
Such a waste of space
No place
In this wonderful place
For my existance
To continue on pace

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Apprentice_poet55 replied...
Oct. 16, 2013 at 8:03 am

Using some more figurative language will help to convey your emotions.

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