A smattering of freckles
Brighten up your cheeks that
Rosy blush at my touch;
gentle as the breeze.
I really like how short it is, really I know I could never make a short poem that actually works so well. There is one thing though, I just don't think the first and second lines flow quite right. But other than that, it's great:)
thanks so much! yeah, i was just wondering if it can develop into something better. will work on it!
Hey there! this is really good! I like the simplicity of it, yet its so sweet and touching! I love the imagry and I like how it is showed and not completelety told! Awesome job. When it is posted I will read/rate/comment! Keep rockin!
I like the simplicity of it. I do feel like it's a little vague. And please title it. Nonetheless, the imagery is lovely.
I love the detail and imagery infused into your poem! The length of it seems to add a certain uniqueness and meaning to it. Keep it up! :)