Facebook Activity



Teen Ink on Twitter

Home > Forums > Writers' Workshop Forums > Poetry & Lyrics > I'll try some feedback, hit me up!

Writers' Workshop Forums

Where teen writers share their work
   
Next thread » « Previous thread

I'll try some feedback, hit me up!

GraphicWriter posted this thread...
Jun. 14, 2013 at 11:57 pm

I've been here for a while, a couple months, and I have a lot posted on here. I don't read as many of other people's work as I should so comment below if you want some constructive critism and please look and comment on my things as well! Thanks!

Reply to this Thread Post a new Thread
Laugh-it-OutThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 15, 2013 at 9:10 am

Hey There!! I will take a look at three of your pieces if you take a look at three of mine :) so.. can you please read: "A Tragic Story" (short story not novel) "As The World Goes On" and "The Vows"! Thanks, keep rockin

Reply to this Thread Post a new Thread
BlackbeltJamesThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 15, 2013 at 12:44 pm

Hey, I'd really appreciate it if you commented and rated my story "Belly Of The Beast", it's my most recent work and it would be nice to see how I'm progressing. Of course if you would rather look at anything else, please feel free.

Thanks :)

Reply to this Thread Post a new Thread
GraphicWriter replied...
Jun. 15, 2013 at 1:29 pm

Awesome, I checked out your work. Could you read, "Subzero Tranquilizers, Old Wallets; Old Trust, and Beating for Boston." Please.

Reply to this Thread Post a new Thread
GraphicWriter replied...
Jun. 15, 2013 at 1:30 pm

I'd be more that happy to check it out! @BlackbeltJames

Reply to this Thread Post a new Thread
mrsmusicforlifeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 24, 2013 at 11:21 am

I'd really apprectiate it if you checked out my songs, "Thinking Of You" and "I Don't Need Your Love Anymore". Thanks in advance!!! x

Reply to this Thread Post a new Thread
LexusMarieThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 24, 2013 at 1:08 pm

Hey there! Would you mind reading my new poem 'Celestial Space'? I'll rate/comment on whatever you'd like. And it's nice to meet you!

Reply to this Thread Post a new Thread
GraphicWriter replied...
Jun. 24, 2013 at 8:53 pm

Well just anything that catches your eye really. I'm not too picky(:

Reply to this Thread Post a new Thread
ZeroDarkFlirty replied...
Jun. 25, 2013 at 12:22 am

Hi there! I'd appreciate it if you reviewed my newest work, "Mirrored Walls." (You reviewed my other work, "Ships in the Night," already) In the meantime, I'll find an article of yours that strikes my fancy.

Reply to this Thread Post a new Thread
GraphicWriter replied...
Jun. 25, 2013 at 12:07 pm

Awesome, I'd be happy to

Reply to this Thread Post a new Thread
candlelightwriterThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 25, 2013 at 2:03 pm

I would really appreciate it if you could look at my newest article "The Price of a Smile". Thank you.

Reply to this Thread Post a new Thread
Rolledthestone replied...
Jun. 25, 2013 at 2:54 pm

You wanna check out some of my stuff? Don't really care which poem you pick but World War III and 905- WORLD are my personnal favs. I'll comment on some of ur stuff in a sec.

Reply to this Thread Post a new Thread
cowgirl4everThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 27, 2013 at 7:02 pm

Please take a look at my poems in the forumn, "Winter poem," and "Beauty Marks." They aren't my best, so feedback would be useful:) I'll take a look at some of your things!

Reply to this Thread Post a new Thread
StarlitSunriseThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 28, 2013 at 12:21 pm

I have just commented on Beat My Heart, Instrument of War, Battlefield, Higher Powers, and Defensive. I would love it if you could take a look at some of mine as well. :)

Reply to this Thread Post a new Thread
Superhero_FanThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 12, 2013 at 2:28 pm

Hey Graphic! I just commented on Canvas, and words. Good job! Will you please look at my poem Sunset? It's on the first page of the forums. Thanks!

Superhero~

Reply to this Thread Post a new Thread
tragic-poetThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 15, 2013 at 2:19 am

Can you read DO YOU WANT OUT OF YOUR SKIN? Its a forum. Thanks!

Reply to this Thread Post a new Thread

Launch Teen Ink Chat
Site Feedback