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The World's All As It Should Be

Poetic_Person posted this thread...
Jun. 13, 2013 at 2:05 pm

Stay where you are,
Don't move.
The unseen are riding tonight.
They have waited for this hour--
The Awakening Hour--
They have prepared so long for this night.
Listen well,
You can hear their cries.
Look at that,
Up there in the skies--
Was that a full moon I saw?
The hall clock begins to chime,
The winds are starting to call.
Florrboards are creaking,
Creatures are sneaking.
Was that a skeleton hand,
Peeking out of the night?
Is this house shaking,
Or is it me?
Darkness surrounds the walls.
I'm trapped
I'm dead
I'm frightened
The world's all as it should be
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zander101 replied...
Jun. 13, 2013 at 2:33 pm

ummm sounds like something i know what your talking about sir,
and why should our world be this way?

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RozaLaurineThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 17, 2013 at 9:16 pm

The poem is alright, I understand but nothing like this will everr happen
But i feel its a really good piece

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